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Have you ever ‘Melted in someone’s arms?’ You have heard this one said often Have you ever ‘Drowned in a kiss’? Have you ever felt your ‘Heart soften’? Have you ever been struck, by a ‘thunder bolt?’ This one sounds if it would hurt, Do you think you ever ‘Lost the plot?’ Or ever “Lost your shirt” Have you been ‘Twisted around someone’s little finger’ Or ‘thrown caution’ to the wind.’ Sometimes it’s not good to linger, Especially if you sinned... Have you ‘Fallen in love’ or ‘Trembled with desire?’ ‘Battled with your conscience’ or had your ‘Soul set on fire’. Have you ever ‘Thrown a tantrum’ or ‘Covered up your tracks?’ Have you ever ‘Caught a cold, given up the ghost, or even hit the sack’? Have you ever ‘Struck a deal’, or even ‘Hit the target.’ Looking back on these lines, I hope that you don’t for-get How life can seem quite harsh sometimes, just look down at the list From hitting Fighting Falling, even doing a twist Life is quite exhausting, when the only thing I caught, It wasn’t good or exciting, it wasn’t something I bought It’s a germ from times of old, from days of time forgotten I woke up this morning with a cold, and I am feeling rotten. So I think on my second thought, because the first one I dismissed That today I’ll stop in bed and I may even try to get … …drunk.
© ~GG~2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/21/2012 8:23:00 PM
Lots of fun expressions in this one, Mandy. I thought it was gonna end up a love poem because of all the love expressions at the beginning and then I could see you were just showing us the dramatic expressions we use in our regular lives. Nicely done.
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Date: 8/16/2012 5:52:00 PM
Been and done everyone of those things, my dear Mandy! Wasn't quite sure where it was going... then wham! the line line gave me a big guffaw! LOL Loved it... big huggeroonies, Jack xxxxxx
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:07:00 AM
Well Golden Girl, I guess I'd have to answer 'yes' to all your qustions... life's really a mixmaster... Hope you're feeling better... you managed to write a splendid poem in spite of your 'bug'... did 'a little drop' help...;-) Terry
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Date: 8/16/2012 7:45:00 AM
I hate a cold it makes me miserable, nothing like a tot of something or good news to chase the cold blues away xx
Date: 8/16/2012 5:37:00 AM
this was wonderful.. I loved it!! Thank you for all your warm comments on my work.. I look forward to each one. Have a wonderful day :) cory
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Date: 8/15/2012 8:03:00 PM
Amusing! I love it! Have a nice day full of sunshine!
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Date: 8/15/2012 4:15:00 PM
Hilarious!!... Nothing like pitching a good drunk to cure a cold!...Thanks for the laugh, Mandy! - Tim
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Date: 8/15/2012 2:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for sharing, well said! hugs- Laila
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Date: 8/15/2012 11:35:00 AM
Check out Thomas Rice, he might just suit you....Dave
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Date: 8/15/2012 7:27:00 AM
have you ever, fallen down the stairs, and the first question asked,Is. does it hurt?I like this Mandy, hope you can read this by now, i'm just looking at the last word in your poem.
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Date: 8/15/2012 7:16:00 AM
Mandy yep some sayings are quite strange, though I did actually lose my shirt in a game of poker once, I can't think how on earth she won!!! Dave
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