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Haunting Are the Sounds

haunting are the crackling sounds of ice crumbling in the arctic ocean sullen their echoes, foretelling the end of world, when oceans drown us January 2, 2020 Placed 2nd: Ku duet poetry contest by Silent One

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/1/2020 4:27:00 PM

A very descriptive write, Vijay. Tidal waves could be the end...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2020 9:02:00 AM

God is in control so if it is in is plan it will happen if not in his plan it won't. I haven't read in his word where that will happen but a whole lot of other bad things will. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/9/2020 10:07:00 PM

Well-written cautionary piece, Vijay. Congrats on your win. Janice

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/8/2020 7:59:00 PM

A sobering poem with a strong message, Vijay. Congrats on your podium finish.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 1/8/2020 5:28:00 AM

For all its brevity, this one is very profound, and your words perfectly chosen. A very fine write, my friend.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/7/2020 1:08:00 PM

This is truly superb, Vijay. You create the fear of environmental devastation so well in just two lines. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2020 12:14:00 PM

Such a powerful reminder to mankind; nature will find a solution to her problems, but could easily be the victims! Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/7/2020 3:38:00 AM

So powerful... Congratulations on your well deserved win and wish you a very happy New year...

Joseph May

Date: 1/6/2020 9:28:00 AM

Very nicely done Vijay, Congrats on your win..

Constance La France

Date: 1/5/2020 11:23:00 PM

Vijay, wonderful lines that speak the truth the world is facing, Congratualtions _ Constance

Hello There

Date: 1/5/2020 1:25:00 PM

Ooh, poweful and eerie piece, my friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:13:00 PM

Thank you my friend--haven't seen your poems in a while--much appreciate, as always.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/5/2020 8:34:00 AM

Great write, Vijay. A powerful message. Congratulations on your 2nd place win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:12:00 PM

Much appreciate Charles--many thanks.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2020 9:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:11:00 PM

Thank you Eve--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2020 5:55:00 PM

back with my congratulations, dear Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:11:00 PM

Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2020 1:40:00 PM

- Congratulations on a 2st place in the contest, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:11:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/4/2020 11:34:00 AM

back to say congratulations to you my friend... hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:10:00 PM

Thank you my friend-much appreciate.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/4/2020 10:51:00 AM

Very relevant subject beautifully expressed in 2 lines..great..congrats on your placement.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:10:00 PM

Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/4/2020 8:46:00 AM

I did not read below my comment, congratulations Vijay this was certainly a winning poem! Blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:09:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/4/2020 8:45:00 AM

Oh woe, impending disaster creatively told and oh so very true - best wishes, an awesome write. Blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:09:00 PM

Yes--not if but when. Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks.

John Hamilton

Date: 1/4/2020 8:09:00 AM

Tremendous write of impending doom, a stellar write Vijay, congrats on another win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:08:00 PM

So kind of you--thank you John--much appreciate.

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2020 7:13:00 AM

yes and this is haunting also.. a feared truth... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:08:00 PM

Thank you SO--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/3/2020 9:27:00 PM

Scary thought indeed!! Being overwhelmed with Water. In this way. Praying that Never Happens. My best to you in the contest. This is so beautifully written and presented. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:08:00 PM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2020 5:23:00 PM

I agree with Sunshine. haunting and scary the whole thing is. well done, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:07:00 PM

So true. Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/3/2020 4:53:00 PM

What a scary thought, Vijay, and still we have a hard time getting our leaders to take steps to prevent further damage to our environment. Wonderfully written. Best wishes in Silent One's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2020 5:07:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn for the kind feedback--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2020 1:41:00 PM

- Haunting and scary, Vijay - Excellent written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2020 4:22:00 PM

Indeed. Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.