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Haunted Woods

Upon twisted branch, and knotted bark The scattered sunlight breaks, Piercing through the tangled boughs In shifting, darkened shapes. Into the woods, dark, deep and old, Seen through a twilight veil, A fleeting glimpse, a movement A noise, a ghostly wail? Are spirits dancing through the woods As shadows cross the trees, Old broken limbs, misshapen How easily they deceive. Ancient trees on hallowed ground Ages have they stood, Generations past, and now Have walked, the haunted woods. Entry for Into the woods Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One. 6/1/19

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Date: 1/19/2019 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Gary, on a great descriptive and well written poem with great flow. :). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/19/2019 1:17:00 PM
Thank you Eve. :)
Date: 1/13/2019 9:42:00 AM
Dark and mysterious imagery..Congrats on your placement in the contest...
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/13/2019 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. :)
Date: 1/13/2019 8:35:00 AM
Hi Gary, Good imagery. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/13/2019 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Alexis. :)
Date: 1/7/2019 7:23:00 AM
Trees can be fascinating as they age; the tell so many stories and in shadows they tell even more. Well done and good luck with the contest.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/7/2019 7:29:00 AM
Thank you M.L. :)
Date: 1/7/2019 6:46:00 AM
Excellent imagery, Gary, you have captured the 'spirit' of this wood very well. Good luck in the Contest. Thank you for your comment on my 'Haunting' poem, pleased you enjoyed it. // Barry
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/7/2019 6:57:00 AM
Thank you Barry. :)
Date: 1/6/2019 9:41:00 PM
Wonderful rhythm and imagery in your well written poem, Gary! Good luck in the contest! Enjoyed. :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/7/2019 6:57:00 AM
Thank you Laura. :)
Date: 1/6/2019 8:14:00 PM
Love this Gary, great job, best wishes...
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/6/2019 8:29:00 PM
Thank you Charlie. :)

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