Haunted (A Collaboration W/Audrey Carey)

Every corner I turn, I see your sweet face
Its memory, like a ghost, haunts me still
I recall how you loved me, you gave me your all
I can not believe that I just let you go!
Now my heart, so heavy, my days dreary and dark
It is I whose pride I must cast aside

I must search in earnest, lay every doubt aside
And pray day comes, when again, I touch your sweet face
When days become brighter no longer to exist in the dark
I promise, on my honor to give you my all
'Til you return to me, there is no place I want to go
So right here in this time I wait for you still

Your joy, your pain,  every heart beat, I'll share it all
We’ll blend as one, lay insecurities aside
Wherever you may be, my heart and I also will go
Haunted no longer by the memory of your sweet face
For now I know above all else, I love you still
In the light of your eyes I bloom, but slowly, I die in the dark

When the storms of life bring in clouds so dark
When loneliness engulfs me, clearly I see it all
In the quiet of night when all is still
I lay alone in our bed, I cast my mask aside
On your pillow I swear there’s the imprint of your sweet face
Tears flow, my pain grows, get no respite, no where to go

Every thought of you lingers  and won’t let me go
Find no comfort in solitude as I sit in the dark
I pretend your laying here; I can almost touch your face
Ingratitude was what I offered, while you gave to me your all
Your love, your quiet devotion, taken for granted and cast aside
For wanton, shallow affection, now I’m nothing!  I need you still

If only you could see me and I could see you still
If you would come to me now, today, or I to you, go
I’d pledge my life; my true devotion put my wanderings aside
No longer would sadness embrace me as I pace in the dark
My heart I’d give only to you, I'd forsake the many others, all!
And bask in sunlight forever, if I could only see your sweet face

In my eyes your still the light that shines in the dark
I would go anywhere for you, for you I'd give my all
Brush my foolish pride aside that once more I may see your sweet face

* Entry for Jared Pickett's "Sestina" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest "The Sestina" Jimmy. Love, Carol
Foster Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 6:28 PM
Congratulations on your place in this interesting contest. well done Jimmy. I love the way the last verse scans...cheers Margaret
Johnson Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 10:12 AM
Great entry. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Pickett Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 9:19 AM
What is good my friend.... I have not forgot about our collaboration Jimmy, I have just been busy... I have a thought for one and since our mail can't go through, hit me up at [email protected] for ideas so we can get this poem going and spice up our beloved soup......... CONGRATULATIONS on your poem being one of my 18 chosen as Sestina winners...... Talk to you later my friend.....:JP]
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 8:43 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your HM in the Sestina contest... enjoy your special honor for an equally special write...with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Byrne Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 5:53 PM
the collaboration has served you well!
Fraser Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 3:28 PM
Blimey by golly, what a gem of a write by you two. My very best wishes to you both in the contest. I doubt you'll need it > James
Devonshire Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 12:54 PM
What a remarkable collaboration, Jimmy and Audrey. I cannot tell who wrote which section. The sestina form is difficult for me, but I congratulate both of you for coming up with this heartfelt poem! Best wishes for the contest!! Love, Carolyn Audrey, is there any way you can get word of my latest contest to Jimmy before 30 entries are received? Hope so.
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May 15, 2010 at 12:08 PM
very beautiful my dear friends. .Charma
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