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Sandra and Mom - 1958  She was 42 and I was 19.
She passed at age 55 in 1971 when I was 32.

There is a time in life we might regret in missing opportunities to learn that which we thought somehow could be offset since living current days was our concern. That time has haunted me as years flew by, and looking back, so wish I took the time to gather facts untold- and wonder why I never felt this knowledge would be prime. It haunts me now- not knowing things is sad: how did my Mom live out her teenage years; what was her life before she met my Dad? What situations brought her smiles or tears? So many questions weren't asked back then; taking for granted some time down the road these subjects would be honored- where and when more interest in them at that time showed. It haunts me now- I never thought of this; how often life does not give us a lead- what day we'll lose the loved ones we will miss. It haunts me now- so young she left, indeed. I was then thirty-two, she fifty-five. It haunts me that our time together ceased before I gathered knowledge to archive those things I long for; peace to be released. February 26, 2023 Contest: Writing Challenge - H Words Sponsor: Constance La France Word Chosen: No. 9 - Haunted My use of the word haunted: "To preoccupy the mind of someone, typically in a troubling way." wordhippo.com

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Date: 3/2/2023 12:49:00 AM
Sandra, excellent writing on the theme, I love the photograph also and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/2/2023 7:09:00 AM
Thank you again, Constance. "Haunted" stirred emotions in me. I appreciated your uplifting comments and nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/28/2023 7:44:00 PM
Sandra, you are twenty years older than I, but even so, we share the same sentiments. I watched my mom on her dying bed. Hospice-ridden. If only I could have spoken to her once more, in a tone she could've understood. Love this! My NJ, dear friend. Congrats on your winning placement! ~Charlie
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/2/2023 7:07:00 AM
Charles, I am so sorry you experienced this too, and that you can identify with my poem. Thank you so much for your visit and uplifting comment, and congrats. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 2/28/2023 4:48:00 PM
Very moving Sandra, so many things one wishes they’d asked, time passes by and suddenly it’s too late to ask. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/2/2023 7:01:00 AM
Yes, for sure, Belle. Thanks again for your visit and congratulations. Hugs, Sanddra
Date: 2/28/2023 9:29:00 AM
Your beautiful poem touched my heart because I've been haunted by the same thing: why didn't I ask when there was still time. Many congratulations for a heartfelt write!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/2/2023 7:00:00 AM
Dear Ann, I am so sorry that you experienced the same haunt. I am thankful you can identify with my poem, and I appreciate your congratulations! Hugs, Sandra

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