Hating You a Poem of Love

Hating you Is Fire Hating you is Bursting Licking Flames Passions Wicked Dreams Wanton Yearning Ugly beyond Words Ugly beyond The stre tch Of my imagining. Beyond the sleepless nights. The haunted days. your eyes brilliant blue beyond the sky blue beyond the robin’s blazing eggs of perfection wild blue thoughts of Hatred turn me rot me I am oath breaking sister incarnate putrid stinking worthy of the crumbs loving you was no more beautiful

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Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 10/13/2012 10:48:00 AM

This luvly demonstration of creativity. Good one and luv it.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/12/2012 5:03:00 PM

I love the way you have structured this poem. I only have one poem with a somewhat similar structure that I forgot about. I'll have to find it and post it. You have probably noticed that all my poems but one rhyme. It is the form I feel most comfortable with.

Allison Ballard

Date: 10/12/2012 3:56:00 PM

Interesting concept. And the layout certainly adds to make it an interesting read. I especially like the robin's egg imagery :) Cheers.