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a blue-colored hole on surface of the liquid the moon flubs its gait as it forms the horizon my beloveds radiance Third place contest winner Written: May 29, 2021 Tanka Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: M. L. Kiser Tanka, format 5/7/5/7/7/ checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2021 5:28:00 PM

Loved that last line "my beloved's radiance" Congrats, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/5/2021 4:47:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I appreciate your generous visit and comment; have a great weekend.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/4/2021 4:54:00 PM

Lasaad, congrats on your win with this enchanting tanka! Blessings, Kim M

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/5/2021 4:47:00 AM

Thanks, dear Kim. I appreciate your generous visit and comment; have a great weekend.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/3/2021 3:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Lasaad, in M.L Tanka poetry contest. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/5/2021 4:48:00 AM

Thanks, Eve. I appreciate your generous visit and comment; have a great weekend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/3/2021 1:46:00 PM

Congrats on your winner. I enjoyed reading this one. Love brings out the best in us. Thanks for your visit to say congrats. Sara

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/5/2021 4:49:00 AM

Thanks, dear Sara. I appreciate your generous visit and comment; have a great weekend.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/3/2021 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations!

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/3/2021 10:16:00 AM

Thanks, Alex. I appreciate your kind words.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/3/2021 10:10:00 AM

Lasaad, congratulations on your win. You have created,, in five lines, a museum portrait of romance and serenity in blue that invites us to look deeply into the picture of serenity. This is delightful. Blessings to you.

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/3/2021 10:16:00 AM

Thanks, dear Sam, your comment is delightful, and I appreciate your kind words. Blessings and best regards.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2021 9:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Have a blessed day.............

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/3/2021 10:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment, dear Paula, stay well and best wishes

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/30/2021 1:46:00 AM

Lovely tanka.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/29/2021 5:59:00 PM

Mesmerizing, my dearest friend Lasaad. Well done. Stay safe!

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/29/2021 6:21:00 PM

Thank you very much, Dear friend, Demetrios, for your valuable visit and great comment. Blessings