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Harmony

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Inspired by Constance La France

written 6/30/2023

Under the calm umbra of oak trees dome Spirited dapple light sparks the old home. Emerald, green blades and spun webs In lace with morning dew, rhythmical ebbs. Spreading around natures white daisies A garden harmony, one with time crazies. A magic merry-go-round for delighted bumblebees And butterflies as they are not hard to please. With a taste of nectar on their lips and the sunshine In their hearts unseen while they dine. Time is daunting its wing steps forward, As it does its rounds sifting shadows onward.

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Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2023 1:50:00 PM

Eve, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge H Words, love the image too !

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2023 3:34:00 PM

what a delightful summer poem Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/4/2023 10:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Have a blessed/great day.................

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/4/2023 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations, Eve, on your win in the contest for your enchanting poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2023 5:42:00 AM

- A lovely summer poem, Eve - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/1/2023 9:52:00 PM

The very first verse is compelling in its quality of rhyming and building impressive images with poetic skill. I felt forced to stop and relish the reading. As many as seven images in just two lines and all of them concrete: just fabulous. The same joy of reading continues till the end: sifting shadows onward. In Urdu they say: Lajawab: unparalleled under the perfect title Harmony. It's indeed great, Eve.

Eve Roper
Date: 7/1/2023 10:07:00 PM

Thank you, you honor me.. it really builds up my self... Bless you my friend

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/1/2023 5:55:00 PM

Very beautifully done file Poet with a wonderful heart. Panagiota

Eve Roper
Date: 7/1/2023 6:57:00 PM

Oh, you're so preciouses, your sweet fragrance of flower. Thank you for always enjoying my work, your words are always so dear to me and very encouraging.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/1/2023 12:52:00 PM

That first verse drew me in…so pretty, Eve!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/1/2023 1:53:00 AM

I assume this is for the contest. And what a fine poem you wrote. Delicate and elegant which should achieve a high rank. Splendid descriptions with nature at its best. Hugs my dear friend.