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Happy Old Jack

This old bod is certainly slowing down But you'll never see this guy wearing a frown My silly old smile Can be seen for miles Don't need street lights, my smile lights the town © Jack Ellison 2015

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/8/2015 9:26:00 PM

What a smile you have Jack. The sun doesn't have anything on you.

Michael Tor
Date: 10/9/2015 2:32:00 PM

Jack why not so happy?

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/9/2015 7:18:00 AM

Not so happy today!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/8/2015 5:14:00 PM

Of that I can certainly believe... Your smiles brighter than the aureo boralis I have perceived... Or is that your smile that we have seen, surely I haven't been that naive... So stand up and bow, we give you leave... You've lite up the heavens I do believe...

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/9/2015 7:18:00 AM

Love, Jack xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/8/2015 3:13:00 PM

Those teeth are surely pearly white...no lights needed when out at night...stops deer in their tracks...it's a matter of fact...so get your fork and knife it's venison tonight

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/9/2015 7:18:00 AM

Cheers!

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 10/8/2015 7:44:00 AM

I believe I can see it from where I sitting, Jack, don't worry about being slow, just tell her you're concentrating on your accuracy . lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/8/2015 8:02:00 AM

"concentrating on your accuracy" LOL will keep that in mind, my friend!!!