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Happy In 4,3,2,1

The 'crucial' material, superficial and trivial, Affects subjects in context of perfected defects, Venial miracles, remedials for the cynical, Introspect. Project and infect, this selected side-effect. 14/08/17

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Date: 10/7/2017 1:22:00 AM
Very creative and intelligent, Fariq - Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this wonderful write - blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/6/2017 1:56:00 PM
I love this, well deserved 1st place :)
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Date: 10/5/2017 7:29:00 AM
Unique and clever. Congratulations
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Date: 10/4/2017 9:23:00 PM
Thank you everyone for taking the time to read this. Deeply appreciated!!
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win! :)
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Date: 10/4/2017 3:28:00 PM
Lovely rhythmic flow. Congrats.
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Date: 10/4/2017 2:04:00 PM
Fariq, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:22:00 PM
Fariq, sorry it took so long, but I loved the internal rhyme here, and your theme is perfect! Congrats on your first place win! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Fariq Yusoff
Date: 10/4/2017 9:24:00 PM
No worries Juli-Michelle. Thank you for the opportunity and placement. Hope you enjoy this piece as much as I did writing it.

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