Fariq Yusoff Poet Rhyme

Happy In 4,3,2,1

The 'crucial' material, superficial and trivial,
Affects subjects in context of perfected defects,
Venial miracles, remedials for the cynical,
Introspect. Project and infect, this selected side-effect.

14/08/17

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Gregory Richard Barden October 7, 2017 at 1:22 AM Very creative and intelligent, Fariq - Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this wonderful write - blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)

Darren White October 6, 2017 at 1:56 PM I love this, well deserved 1st place :)

Shirley Rebstock October 5, 2017 at 7:29 AM Unique and clever. Congratulations

Fariq Yusoff October 4, 2017 at 9:23 PM Thank you everyone for taking the time to read this. Deeply appreciated!!

Heidi Sands October 4, 2017 at 4:03 PM Congratulations for your top win! :)

Line Gauthier October 4, 2017 at 3:28 PM Lovely rhythmic flow. Congrats.

Constance La France October 4, 2017 at 2:04 PM Fariq, congratulations on your win !

Juli- Michelle October 4, 2017 at 1:22 PM Fariq, sorry it took so long, but I loved the internal rhyme here, and your theme is perfect! Congrats on your first place win! Love, Juli-Michelle Fariq Yusoff October 4, 2017 at 9:24 PM No worries Juli-Michelle. Thank you for the opportunity and placement. Hope you enjoy this piece as much as I did writing it.