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Poetry/Tanka/Acrostic/Happy
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1658-327-08
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, July 08, 2024
For the International Contest, Tank-A-Crostic Time Again
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 07/29/2024

Second Place

Premium Photo | Mother and her baby daughter

"Rest In Peace Mom, I love you."

                                                 Constance

Happy

Happy old photo,
Am I, that sweet baby girl?
Pretty my pink dress-
Precious girl in her mom's arms;  
Yes, true love in a mom's gaze !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 1/7/2025 11:16:00 PM
adorable momento te POETRY gave us]congrats dear, alkas
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Constance La France
Date: 1/8/2025 1:22:00 PM
Alkas, thank you for the comment, compliment and congrats~
Date: 7/30/2024 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Happy" write. Great/Lovely Picture. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2024 2:42:00 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations, comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 7/30/2024 7:12:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end... I love the photo... You look so adorable... God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2024 2:43:00 PM
Beata, thank you for the congrats, and for the compliment, God bless, Constance
Date: 7/29/2024 8:13:00 PM
This one made me smile! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Constance. Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2024 2:44:00 PM
Janice, thank you for the smile, compliment, and congrats, Constance
Date: 7/29/2024 2:44:00 PM
This is sweet and nostalgic, Constance. The last line was precious. Congrats.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2024 2:44:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and for the compliment and congrats, Constance
Date: 7/29/2024 1:49:00 PM
Beautiful tanka, Constance. So heartwarming and heartfelt. Congrats on your placement. Cheers from Newfoundland, Jim
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Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2024 2:45:00 PM
Jim, thank you for the compliment and congrats, Constance in Ontario
Date: 7/12/2024 12:13:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, summoning me to that longing for a mother's love and her gentle touch. I never had that growing up but I have always imagined the beauty of such experience.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/13/2024 3:08:00 PM
Marguerite, thank you for the compliment, and comment, Constance
Date: 7/11/2024 9:05:00 AM
Such a sweet and reflective tale!’ How beautiful this write is Constance. Very heart warming. Great photo as well.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/13/2024 3:08:00 PM
Edward, thank you for the compliment and comment, Constance
Date: 7/10/2024 4:35:00 PM
Love 's aura surrounds the baby girl, Wonderful write Constance
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Constance La France
Date: 7/13/2024 3:09:00 PM
Joseph, thank you for the comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 7/10/2024 12:12:00 PM
A Mum's gaze is truly the window to her soul - so much communicated by it. Love this tanka, Constance :)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/13/2024 3:09:00 PM
Suzette, it sure is and thank you for the comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 7/9/2024 11:21:00 AM
Oh so much said in so few, well chosen words! Is this truly your mom and u? Gorgeous beauties!xo
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Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2024 10:17:00 AM
Crystol, thank you for the comment, and compliment, so much in just one gaze, Constance
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