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Happiness

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Poetry notes:
12/25/2018

Poetry form:  double monorhyme :)

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world's trouble dark sky... depression subtle i deny... emotions muddle i sigh... thoughts befuddle i belie... tears puddle i cry... God subtle I comply... Divine cuddle I rely... Believer's huddle I ally... Blessings double Blue sky...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 6/15/2019 2:13:00 AM
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You said I introduced you to . poetry soup, I'M glad cause you really give . me much to think about. I will read up on Monorhyme, maybe give it a try. Great as usual
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Mark Toney
Date: 6/15/2019 5:42:00 PM
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You did introduce me to PoetrySoup, Barbara, and for that I'm grateful. Go ahead and give the monorhyme a try. ~Mark
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/13/2019 10:52:00 AM
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number 7 I'd seen before and still loving it!
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Mark Toney
Date: 6/15/2019 5:43:00 PM
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Andrea, how nice to discover these incredibly encouraging comments long after you've made them! ~Mark
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/18/2019 8:27:00 AM
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Wow Mark - your poems are certainly different and much thought goes into them. I absolutely love this double Monorhyme. Great write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Mark Toney
Date: 1/18/2019 8:37:00 AM
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Thank you, Jennifer. You made my day! ~Mark :)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/30/2018 10:35:00 PM
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EXCELLENT. Happy New Year.
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/30/2018 10:49:00 PM
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Thank you, Anisha. ~Mark
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/28/2018 6:31:00 PM
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It just got better and better (toward the bright side) with your double rhymes! Nicely done
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/28/2018 6:58:00 PM
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I’m so happy you liked it, Andrea :) ~Mark
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/27/2018 5:45:00 PM
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Very sweet, and so well written!
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/27/2018 6:07:00 PM
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Thank you, kind Michelle :) ~Mark
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/25/2018 9:14:00 PM
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Super witty with this double monorhyme, Mark.
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/25/2018 10:20:00 PM
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Why, thank you, Line! ~Mark

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