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Hannah's World

Fair is the world where Hannah lives; No woes that can't be kissed away. Cushioned in arms of selfless love, She dwells in beauty every day. Warnings and lessons must be taught; A world of troubles to be met. We look into her trusting eyes And cannot bear to tell her yet. The time will come she must be told Of dangers lurking every where, But for this while, we hold her close, Blessed in her perfect world to share. Came in 3rd in Brian's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/25/2012 11:18:00 AM
A lovely poem by you Joyce.Congratulations on your win.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/25/2012 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Verse Of Yours" contest Joyce. Love, Carol"
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Date: 2/24/2012 9:09:00 PM
JOYCE~CONGRATUALTIONS! With your wonderful win..in Brian's contest ;-)~ always*PD
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:13:00 PM
ongrats Joyce on a fine third place win luv..
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Date: 2/24/2012 3:02:00 PM
I can feel a mother's or parent's love in this one..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats on your win in Brian's contest..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2012 8:41:00 AM
I am enjoying reading a vast array of poetry this morning. I am glad yours was amongst the ones posted here that I was able to read and enjoy Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 3:32:00 PM
You are a brilliant poet Joyce,this was a touching poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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