Hannah's Plea

Hannah’s Plea

He sleeps in my arms,
 My prayer, my little one,
Born of a plea from depths so deep
 Only dreams know the origin.

Gone the constant whispering
 Of Hannah, the barren,
Whispers always following me –
 A prowling pack of sullen dogs.

My soul rejoices – thankful my heart;
 In my delirium
My Lord blessed me with such laughter
 They thought I drank too much new wine.

Only today – this one –
 Noon following midnight –
Each minute he grows in my eyes;
 I store these memories like stars.

Each breath we share –
 A bonding of spirits –
Joins our hands as mother and son –
 Comfort like cashmere when Eli calls.

Out of dust, joy stands up –
 My joyful heart sings out;
My hands remember holding him
 Covering me as a warm new coat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Running around the bases again with an ovation for your placement with Brian. Well done, my friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 9:46 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/poem. I love your line, "My soul rejoices – thankful my heart;" Being thankful is so very important. Enjoy your win and day..................
Gaul Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 7:42 AM
Depths so deep, this is filled with feeling and a mother's love. I could feel the warmth flowing through the last two lines into me. This is fine poetry, it reaches out and shares the most human of feelings. Congratulations Sam.
Watt Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:22 PM
I can only imagine this is from one of your one-woman shows. Hannah's tale would be a beautiful journey to share in drama and song. To imagine her sacrifice at committing her firstborn to the Lord's service. "Each minute he grows in my eyes". I love this, Sam. A Fave.
Watt Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 10:34 PM
Like Mary "giving up" Jesus to the ministry of the kingdom, then blessed with several more children. I imagine Hannah was a biblical heroine in Mary's heart.
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August 27, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Thank you my friend! Actually I only do a very short fifteen minute monologue of Hannah as she prepares to make good on her promise to give Samuel back to the Lord. Her heartbreak is only outweighed by her gratitude for Samuel. Honored by your "fav." Thank you! P.S. - a God wink - she had six more children!
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