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Hannah's Plea

Hannah’s Plea He sleeps in my arms, My prayer, my little one, Born of a plea from depths so deep Only dreams know the origin. Gone the constant whispering Of Hannah, the barren, Whispers always following me – A prowling pack of sullen dogs. My soul rejoices – thankful my heart; In my delirium My Lord blessed me with such laughter They thought I drank too much new wine. Only today – this one – Noon following midnight – Each minute he grows in my eyes; I store these memories like stars. Each breath we share – A bonding of spirits – Joins our hands as mother and son – Comfort like cashmere when Eli calls. Out of dust, joy stands up – My joyful heart sings out; My hands remember holding him Covering me as a warm new coat.

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Date: 8/28/2020 1:45:00 PM
Running around the bases again with an ovation for your placement with Brian. Well done, my friend!
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Date: 8/28/2020 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/poem. I love your line, "My soul rejoices – thankful my heart;" Being thankful is so very important. Enjoy your win and day..................
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Date: 8/28/2020 7:42:00 AM
Depths so deep, this is filled with feeling and a mother's love. I could feel the warmth flowing through the last two lines into me. This is fine poetry, it reaches out and shares the most human of feelings. Congratulations Sam.
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Date: 8/27/2020 1:55:00 PM
This is gorgeous, Sam. Flows so well. I like "joy covering me as a warm new coat" Congrats on your Honorable Mention
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/27/2020 1:57:00 PM
Thank you Carol! I didn't know much about Hannah but her story is an amazing one. Grateful for your vist and congratulations!
Date: 8/25/2020 6:22:00 PM
I can only imagine this is from one of your one-woman shows. Hannah's tale would be a beautiful journey to share in drama and song. To imagine her sacrifice at committing her firstborn to the Lord's service. "Each minute he grows in my eyes". I love this, Sam. A Fave.
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John Watt
Date: 8/27/2020 10:34:00 PM
Like Mary "giving up" Jesus to the ministry of the kingdom, then blessed with several more children. I imagine Hannah was a biblical heroine in Mary's heart.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/27/2020 2:01:00 PM
Thank you my friend! Actually I only do a very short fifteen minute monologue of Hannah as she prepares to make good on her promise to give Samuel back to the Lord. Her heartbreak is only outweighed by her gratitude for Samuel. Honored by your "fav." Thank you! P.S. - a God wink - she had six more children!

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