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Hangover-Bangover

For Cecil... Feelin' like a moose, I drank too much o dat juice I was kel on All That but now I fell flat What happened last night Will I ever feel all right? Lubricious waves of melconcoly cascade like a torrent of falling stars What happened last night Now I'm hung-over, and last nights bang is over She kicked me out of the room Boom boom boom A sigh beneath the sheets. I just want to weep. When will this be over? My brutal hangover. What happened last night...

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Date: 8/2/2015 12:27:00 AM
Kbear, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/1/2015 12:10:00 PM
Kbear, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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