Hanging Tree

There is an ancient oak, outside some hallowed ground:
The hanging tree, once struck by lightning bolts, seems dead -
Its trunk is hollowed out, yet leaves can still be found,
Just like a corpse with hair that’s growing on its head.

I have a tale to tell - it’s from my long gone youth,
And that decrepit tree was looking strong and stout.
It sounds a silly tale - I swear it is the truth -
Though in my younger days, at times, I had my doubt.

Once, in my courting days, I walked home in a storm,
And heard the village clock, that chimed the midnight hour.
As lightning forked, I longed to be home, dry and warm.
I wasn’t drunk nor had my faculties turned sour,
But in a flash, I saw a figure in that tree -
Distorted, hideous, a hanged man’s purple face -
And yet more lightning showed it crystal clear to me.
As thunder boomed, I ran as if to win a race.

Another flash of light and I was not alone:
The hanging man stood there, thick rope around his neck.
I shivered, swore and shook, afraid, chilled to the bone,
And recognised the man: the killer Nathan Beck -
I’d seen him hanged to death, a year ago that day.
He said, ‘I swore revenge, I knew I could come back.
‘I’ll get my vengeance now, and you will have to pay.’
He put the noose around my neck, the rope still slack.

The noose was getting tight, he dragged me to the tree,
Attempts to fight no good, as though I were a child -
I cursed and kicked and punched, while struggling to get free.
I fought hard for my life, the thunder ever wild.
My life flashed by my eyes, a man about to die:
I thought of family and of my sweetheart June.
And sturdy young man that I was, began to cry.
(I nearly fainted like a maiden in a swoon).

In blinding flashing light, I found the Devil near.
He smiled and looking proud, he beckoned Beck to him,
And Nathan Beck was gone - I won’t forget that leer.
I must have passed out then, my memories are dim.

I came round in a daze, beneath the burnt out tree,
The noose was gone. It was a cloudless dawn that day.
I saw two farmhands grin. They shook their heads at me.
‘Too much to drink last night,’ I heard one laugh and say.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/18/2012 4:15:00 PM
Nice to see a narrative and something with a wee bit of meat on its bones winning ;). Congrad's on getting through the first round! Couldn't be in better company. Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2012 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your two poems making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest X 2. Wishing you the best in the finals Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2011 7:34:00 PM
Great job to get two through. Good luck, Jack. Scary poem, this. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/28/2011 6:19:00 PM
YAYYY, this and one other of yours is through to round two of the Soup contest. Way to go, Jack.
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Date: 4/27/2011 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations Jack on your win in Constance's "The Tree" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 8:09:00 AM
Congrats jack on your featured poem this week on P.S. ..wonderful piece to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 4/25/2011 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, jack
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:31:00 AM
I liked it 1st time Jack.Excellent.Congrats on your win---kash
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Date: 4/25/2011 4:57:00 AM
A welldeseved win Jack. many congrats.
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Date: 4/24/2011 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance, jack
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Date: 4/24/2011 2:30:00 PM
I'm glad this one did well in the contest. I remember seeing it very recently and really enjoying it. Congratulations, Jack!
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Date: 4/24/2011 6:22:00 AM
a total delight with attention to details.. big congrats with huggs, jack! :)
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Date: 4/23/2011 8:57:00 PM
Congrats Jack on a great win in the tree contest with this amazing write my friend.. a great win to celebrate Easter luv..
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Date: 4/23/2011 6:51:00 PM
Great to see you in the winner's circle, Jack. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/23/2011 5:40:00 PM
How did I miss this one, Jack? Awesome spooky story behind your poem. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/23/2011 5:18:00 PM
I wrote a poem at Halloween and posted here at the soup some time back entitled 'The Ballad of Bobby-Lee - very similar to this story. Just goes to prove (Great Minds think alike). Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Jack. lainie
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:50:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest. Wonderful!
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Date: 4/21/2011 4:06:00 AM
Nice story of hanging tree.Best wishes.
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Date: 4/20/2011 11:59:00 PM
wow, you did an amazing job with this narrative of a hanging tree. It could have been entered as a surreal poem for Deb or as tree poem for constance. a very good story!!
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Date: 4/20/2011 8:53:00 PM
This is simply beautiful Jack. The images are awsome. Thanks for the comments dear.
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Date: 4/20/2011 3:54:00 PM
soup mail in a moment~~
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