Hanging On For Dear Life

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I was pulled from a swimming pool when I was 7 years old
   gasping, frightened, cold
   must learn to be water safe before I go in over my head

I was struck by a car when I was 9
   bruised, shaken, embarrassed, but very much alive
   must learn to look both ways

I was told my pneumonia was touch and go when I was 14
   I'd never seen a doctor look so worried before
   must learn to rest

I took a corner too fast on my bike when I was 17
   cut, bleeding, startled
   must learn to ride more slowly around corners

I was rescued by a lifeguard at the beach when I was 22
   frightened by the immense power of the ocean currents
  must learn to respect the rip tide

I was thankful for the seatbelt in a collision when I was 28
   rattled by the poor judgement of the drunk driver
   must learn to drive defensively and never presume safety

I emerged unscratched after spinning 360 on a wet freeway at 47
   protected by a guardian angel from a potential fatality
   must learn to check my tire treads and drive slowly

Not knowing the preciousness of life
   until it was nearly snatched away
   dear life, I love you so!


written 3 Aug 2020

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Date: 8/5/2020 9:52:00 PM
You have had so many "near misses" but God has something in mind; I am sure that with each of these near misses, you got the message.
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Date: 8/6/2020 1:45:00 PM
Right you are, Caren. 'Message Received, Lord!'
Date: 8/5/2020 9:20:00 PM
You have counted up a lot of wisdom in your years, thank you for sharing some of your stories, it is easy to see where you get your positive attitude and appreciation for life!
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Date: 8/5/2020 9:42:00 PM
I feel a little like Bill Murray in Groundhog Day - when you've been around forever, you tend to learn a few things, haha! Thanks for the lovely comment, Michelle!
Date: 8/5/2020 7:09:00 AM
This is so precious, John. Yes, so true - Dear Life, we love you. After reading your poem, I am looking back at my own life and pondering about all the good things and bad things - all the unexpected things - happened at different times and places. Best wishes, My Dear Friend.
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Date: 8/5/2020 9:41:00 PM
Dear Mala, I'm glad I can be an agent of self-reflection. I love to hear the tales that others share of their journey; it is only fair that I reach deeply and share a few of my own. Blessings ~ John
Date: 8/4/2020 1:01:00 PM
This is a Fave and lovely.I relate well to this as I have been the victim of violence more than once... survived a car wreck and far more horrific stuff. Almost drowned been shot at And almost set on fire. God saved us both. I can't get more specific but life is precious. Pangie xx
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Date: 8/4/2020 9:16:00 PM
Every step of our journeys has made us who we are, even the times we tripped or were knocked down. God has taken care of us through it all. I wouldn't change a thing, Panagiota. Thanks for your lovely comment.
Date: 8/3/2020 7:48:00 PM
WoW! John, All of these episodes really happened to you? It wasn’t your time and your guardian angel was with you. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/3/2020 9:41:00 PM
Yes, some might call it good luck or good karma, I prefer to call it Providence. Thanks for the visit, Alexis. I've really enjoyed seeing your comments this week.
Date: 8/3/2020 5:48:00 PM
another fantastic poem from you , John. You are on a roll. Not me though! My best stuff in the past month hardly got read. I have a few to post later but only a few that I really like! I know your sentiments in this poem. I have learned to feel this exact same way,
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Date: 8/3/2020 6:14:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Andrea. I look forward to reading your new writes.
Date: 8/3/2020 1:35:00 PM
This sounds like my life John, I too should not have survived many episodes, I too love life especially after my cardiac arrest 8 years ago, I thank God every time I open my eyes to a new day. Lessons learned will help us to prepare for or anticipate trouble around the corner!
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Date: 8/3/2020 2:08:00 PM
Thanks for letting me know that John. I think you and I are the same age, so the near-misses have accumulated, and the horizon grows closer. Carpe diem!
Date: 8/3/2020 12:39:00 PM
don't know if all those events really happened, john, but if so, you've been exceedingly fortunate in your life (or else, it simply wasn't your time!). you've described this beautifully...
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Date: 8/3/2020 1:11:00 PM
I guess it wasn't my time. These events have all made me appreciate every day, every breath so much. Thank you for your lovely visit, my friend.
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