Hands That Dipped Me

From your hands that dipped me in cool tubs and soft morn wakes, you were the gentle lion taming my bohemian strains; the lamb of summer rain catching me like a feather on your palm... always, your balm poured moon glow of bliss, erring only when my restless flowers needed to bend: from where pictures stood, time bowed shaping night talks, life’s edges, and paused faces. Then the gas light dripped on lacquered frames, silhouettes fading as I collected our thoughts— marbles in my pocket—to keep me safe from cold winds, rough dreams. And tonight, my breath grows wild, noting the fabric of revelries as I click past lenses : you smile; you laugh. Just when evening’s done, you reach your arms in slow motion to hold me close again...hands that dipped me then, gone, without saying goodbye from a wave of coma when I was only 24. Yet among old photographs, we embrace through love's eyes... Daddy, you're my special treat every day! Tell Us About Your Dad Contest Sponsor: Judy Konos
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A   Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 12:54 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA ~
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:20 AM
My favorite so far, congratulations Nette!
Kimathi Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 2:02 AM
A very emotional piece.... Congrats for your top placement in the contest! ;-)
A  Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
Crisci Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your big win in Judy's contest. It's an inspirational and emotional poem that only a little girl needing a daddy's love, affection, care and protection could have felt such loving feelings. Thank you for your kind comments. I wish you all the best in this New Year! Love and Blessings, Andrew.
Garg Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 5:54 AM
Dads are like that only...... congrats on your great win...........
Tunick Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 4:13 AM
He will always be holding you. Beautiful...
Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:12 PM
We with wonderful Daddy's are so favored. congratulations on yours and your poem and win. Love, Joyce
Konos Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. Your dad sounds very very special and I am sorry you lost him at such a young age...I know it's difficult.....
George   Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Brought tears to my eys, Nette. Such a wonderful bond between daughter and father. It can never be replaced with any other love. wonderful writing. bfn Hugs, Elaine
Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 9:18 PM
Very touching nette ... Congrad's on your winning verse. Light & Love
A   Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 10:23 PM
Nette, , Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:24 PM
Extremely emotional Nette ! A great tribute to dad ,, we just hv his memories and keep longing for his tender touch ! Congrats on great win !
Wilson Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 9:26 AM
Just so beautiful as always nette ! Congratulations ! love, Deb
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 10:50 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, nette
Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Beautiful write and great win! Congrats my friend!!!!
Johnson Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 7:03 PM
A great tribute to you dad. Aren't we lucky to have had them? Love, Joyce
Hunter Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Wow, Nette...this took me...
Maverick Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 3:23 PM
Congratulations on winning with this Nette, yet sorry to hear of this sad event at 24years old hope you are well, Joe.
A   Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 6:09 PM
Hi Nette, once again, enjoyed seeing you on Craig's winning list.. always~ pd
Richards Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 8:11 PM
This poem brought me to tears.....the last line of the 2nd stanza....oh wow.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 7:54 PM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON AN EXCELLENT WRITE AS ALWAYS AND WORTHY WIN .. WE LOST POWER FOR 2 DAYS FROM SNOWSTORM AND STILL MANY PROBLEMS COMMENTING TO POETS ON PS BY ME .. SENT TPS A BARRAGE OF SM'S TO NO AVAIL .. STILL A MESS ..OH
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 3:01 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the "Loss" contest - / / Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Marvelously tender write. Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Loss" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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