Hands Reaching Out

~Two chairs staring at each other…empty. Meters away, dark fog gathers to choke their fired gazes piercing the needles of discord strewn on the caving floor both mute, raging… both divided by scrolls of dead sea syllables that gradually, a quivering throat assuages another tattered heart lost in the mist of anger; moving without movement on such a sulfur night: and the chairs creak in anticipation of hands tasting a pour of balm. Till words ramble ,“ I am sorry,” his hands pleading like a sonata of crying winds. Light touches light once, twice--and her hand reaches out ... a nearness of their skin groping . Two chairs move closer and await quarrel's mercy as starglow grants lovers the warmth of forgiving embraces. For Lover's Quarrel Contest Sponsor: Lewis Raynes

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Date: 6/21/2011 2:06:00 PM
Congrats nette on your fantastic win in this contest with this awesome write..love to you, gautami
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:28:00 PM
Congrats Nette luv on your first place win in the contest with this extraordinary exciting entry my friend..oh wow ..enjoy top billing luv..
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:48:00 PM
Worthy win in Brian's contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/21/2011 7:27:00 AM
yikers, a real nightmareof an apology! Love this line "his hands plead like a sonata of crying winds" Light & Love gal friend!
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Date: 12/28/2010 3:35:00 PM
Another super write and good luck in BG's contest with a masterpiece of words and a wonderful apology... amazing Nette.. luv..
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:09:00 PM
Good luck in the contest ..Reads like a winner to me..I hope that the apology worked..Delighted that you stopped by..Sara
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Date: 12/28/2010 11:40:00 AM
ah smiles as I read this-- subtle yet very touching way of saying it --beautiful write as always Nette-- enjoyed reading this :) I hope this won :) -- hugs nikko :)
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Date: 12/28/2010 9:50:00 AM
good feel for the empathy in this Nette best of results in the contest.
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Date: 12/28/2010 8:27:00 AM
Hello Nette: I am new to poetrysoup, thanks of all the comments and I am checking you out too..nice rhymes and prose...Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/27/2010 7:42:00 PM
Thee are many fine poets on here Nette, and you have joined them as far as i'm concerned, you write with such profoundness, a very special gift you have for us all, love your poems, although not always the time to comment i try as hard as possible to read all. Harry. Have a wonderful New Year.
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Date: 12/27/2010 2:28:00 PM
"I am sorry" sometimes that is all that is needed, you write beautifully, with so much depth, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 12/27/2010 9:53:00 AM
four meaningful sentences that can heal us all!! -" i'm sorry" -" i love you" -" please forgive me" -" thank you" :)
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