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As human beings, we are set a trust Dominion over all such lesser things Yet it's axiomatic that we turn to dust The best of what our erudition brings We take a fertile clay in hand to mold The asseveration of our bright intents To throw upon life's wheel and thus behold The magic that our work and will relents But much of what we strive for falls away Our altruistic hopes and aims devoured By all that glitters gold with glut and pay The milk of our accomplishment so soured Perhaps if we'd first taste that bitter cream We'd shape a world more fit ... our childrens' dream. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Late April Standard Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Triple A Challenge - 14 Lines Maximum" Poetry Contest, Robert Haigh, Sponsor.

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Date: 5/2/2018 10:00:00 PM
What a wonderfully deep and true poem, Gregory. Congrats on your win too.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 12:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Carole - so appreciated! :-) <3
Date: 4/24/2018 7:54:00 PM
Another congratulations!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/30/2018 6:08:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Susan! :-) <3
Date: 4/24/2018 7:05:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/30/2018 6:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line! :-) <3
Date: 4/23/2018 7:36:00 AM
The metaphor you have used to convey this life lesson and journey is simply...MAGNIFICENT! Sincerely, Elaine
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/23/2018 8:35:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Elaine, and I'm so pleased you found this one so worthwhile! Blessings and thanks to you, my friend - you are always so kind! :-) <3
Date: 4/21/2018 8:43:00 PM
Nice work, Greg. Salutations and honors to the poet, great expression, bitter cream, soured milk.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2018 6:48:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, RAP - blessings! :-)
Date: 4/21/2018 11:00:00 AM
This was an amazingly wonderful poem using unusual words so perfectly. Well done.....molded into a piece of artwork itself!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2018 6:47:00 AM
That's very kind of you to say, Carrie - thank you SO much, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/21/2018 9:35:00 AM
So apt! A fave! I had just commented on Sandra’s and you spoke my mind but in a much more articulate and artistic way! Great including the photo! Congrats, Greg! <3 Kim
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2018 6:47:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim - so pleased you enjoyed it, friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/20/2018 5:40:00 PM
Fantastic piece Greg! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2018 10:41:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Mo - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 4/20/2018 5:06:00 PM
Superbly done my friend...Congrats on 2'nd place Gregory...stay in the light...^WW^
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2018 10:40:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, W@ - I greatly appreciate the wonderful comments! :-)
Date: 4/20/2018 4:41:00 PM
Back with congrats on your well deserved silver medal. I really like where you took this challenge, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2018 10:40:00 PM
Very kind of you, Line - thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 4/20/2018 4:16:00 PM
Excellent. Great message... congratulations again on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2018 10:39:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! :-) <3
Date: 4/18/2018 10:43:00 PM
Your presentation is beautiful and your words are for musing!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2018 2:38:00 AM
Very kind of you, Juliet - thank you! :-)
Date: 4/18/2018 10:28:00 PM
Beautiful, Gregory. Well done.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2018 2:38:00 AM
Thank you, Line!

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