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Hand and Hand

life
living                                                        forever,
my world each day
with or without you the love of my life.
with or without you the love of my life.
my world each day
forever,
living
life.


Date Written: 10/11/2020


3 Place   Double Tetractys 4 Contest Judged:10/15/2020                     
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2020 7:31:00 PM

Very cool how you mirrored it. Congrats.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/18/2020 10:16:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful day..................

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/16/2020 5:46:00 PM

The emotions in your poem are twice as moving in mirror image, Paula. Beautifully done! Congratulations on your fine win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/18/2020 10:15:00 AM

Thank You, for your note, your congratulations and kind words. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.....................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2020 8:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on a great 3rd place in the contest, Paula :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/18/2020 10:13:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful day with hugs................