Get Your Premium Membership

Hand And Hand

life
living
forever,
my world each day
with or without you the love of my life.
with or without you the love of my life.
my world each day
forever,
living
life.
Date Written: 10/11/2020
3 Place Double Tetractys 4 Contest Judged:10/15/2020 Sponsored by: Eve Roper

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/16/2020 7:31:00 PM
Very cool how you mirrored it. Congrats.
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/18/2020 10:16:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful day..................
Date: 10/16/2020 5:46:00 PM
The emotions in your poem are twice as moving in mirror image, Paula. Beautifully done! Congratulations on your fine win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/18/2020 10:15:00 AM
Thank You, for your note, your congratulations and kind words. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.....................
Date: 10/16/2020 8:39:00 AM
- Congratulations on a great 3rd place in the contest, Paula :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/18/2020 10:13:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful day with hugs................
Date: 10/15/2020 7:41:00 PM
nice Paula. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/18/2020 10:13:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful day................
Date: 10/15/2020 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Paula . Thank you for participating in my Tetractys contest. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/18/2020 10:11:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have a win. So glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day with hugs.................
Date: 10/11/2020 11:54:00 AM
Beautiful ode to the love of your life, Paula!
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/11/2020 1:34:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day...............