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The building is imposing and fearful, a death row, it is heritage, but haunted and very creepy; the gallows still remain and hundreds of unmarked graves. But, knowing all this- I took a dare on HALLOWEEN . . . I went to my bunk in a dark cell with no windows, falling asleep, I dreamt I was being touched by hands; and SCREAMED- I saw a man walking slow and I followed. H e l l o . . . ! He opened a door and stepped through, I did too- It was dark, water dripped, then I saw the man hanging, his neck broken, his eyes bulged and his mouth was smiling; decomposed dead are crawling on the floor and walls. I am fighting when hands tie the noose- my body drops . . . In the mental ward- hands hang me each night as I fight. ___________________________ October 7, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/ Nicholas Street Jail Copyright Protected, ID 17-9477-06-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the Halloween Scare Contest sponsor, Russell Sivey Second Place

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Date: 11/10/2017 12:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your win with a scary poem.
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Date: 11/9/2017 10:48:00 PM
Again, well done BW.
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Date: 11/9/2017 9:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Constance - loved this - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Date: 11/9/2017 3:21:00 PM
Wonderful poem, wonderful win, wonderful person :) Congrats ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:23:00 AM
The making of a great horror movie. About half way through this, outside the house, a pair of mating Sandhill Cranes started calling, gave me chill.
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Date: 10/7/2017 9:18:00 PM
Great twist at the end, very subtle in the mention of the mental ward...hope I read it right....very well written and should do very well
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Date: 10/7/2017 3:49:00 PM
What a scary piece! This gem is penned eloquent
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Date: 10/7/2017 11:02:00 AM
A very spooky tale--dark and scary--apt for the subject matter--best for a win BW!
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