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Acrylic painting by Eve Roper 

Halloween Night

Dusk
Till dawn
As tawny
Night and moon wanes
Darkest dark; bats fly
Ghosts, ugly witches bliss.
Daunted and stark under lit
Streetlamps large black feline tail rise
On bittersweet brisk nocturnal stroll.
Prowling it yearns on spooky Halloween.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 6:53 PM
Hello Eve. What a haunting but cute poem. It made me think of all those children stepping on the crunchy leaves as they walk by decorated houses on Halloween. I used to be so frightened of the witch on The Wizard of Oz. Do you remember her? EEK! This poem was fun to read Eve.
Fowler Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Hi dear Eve. This is delightful for Halloween! Love it! Congratulations! :)
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 11:10 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Eve :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 4:13 PM
Thank you for coming back for a congratulations my dear. hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Thank you for the congratulations my dear. hugs Eve
Empress Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:10 AM
What a fitting picture for this etheree! I am feeling the halloween vibes that emanate from your word weaving so strongly! Hyping me up to get all dressed for halloween! Its actually the only festive time i enjoy, i am not a festive person. Altho we dont celebrate it here in the maldives, i dress up with friends: i love your opening lines imagery and how this flows! Youv highlighted so many aspects of halloween in such a descriptive manner, brilliant! Congratulations on winning. Well deserved.
Roper Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 4:11 PM
Thank you so very much for my placement. The paint is my own acrylic painting.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 7:49 AM
- A spooky night, indeed Eve - Well done :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Love it! Delightfully spooky.
One Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 6:49 AM
Ooh a spooky etheree.. if this is for the contest then I think Ink will love this one, she likes Halloween... Yours flows so well and i can feel the spooky nature of it..
Buhagiar Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 1:34 AM
Loved your dark Halloween Etheree. So well constructed. with plenty of imagery. Blessings.
Vaso Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 12:33 AM
So sweet Eve, it speaks to the season. So, I do have a wee joke for you, why do witches never win baseball games? Cause their bats always fly away!!!!! Hugs!!!
Jones Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 11:25 PM
Good spooky poem!
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