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Acrylic painting by Eve Roper 

Dusk Till dawn As tawny Night and moon wanes Darkest dark; bats fly Ghosts, ugly witches bliss. Daunted and stark under lit Streetlamps large black feline tail rise On bittersweet brisk nocturnal stroll. Prowling it yearns on spooky Halloween.

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Date: 10/17/2023 6:53:00 PM
Hello Eve. What a haunting but cute poem. It made me think of all those children stepping on the crunchy leaves as they walk by decorated houses on Halloween. I used to be so frightened of the witch on The Wizard of Oz. Do you remember her? EEK! This poem was fun to read Eve.
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Date: 10/12/2023 8:07:00 AM
Hi dear Eve. This is delightful for Halloween! Love it! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/11/2023 11:10:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Eve :) - hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/11/2023 4:13:00 PM
Thank you for coming back for a congratulations my dear. hugs Eve
Date: 10/11/2023 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/11/2023 4:12:00 PM
Thank you for the congratulations my dear. hugs Eve
Date: 10/11/2023 10:10:00 AM
What a fitting picture for this etheree! I am feeling the halloween vibes that emanate from your word weaving so strongly! Hyping me up to get all dressed for halloween! Its actually the only festive time i enjoy, i am not a festive person. Altho we dont celebrate it here in the maldives, i dress up with friends: i love your opening lines imagery and how this flows! Youv highlighted so many aspects of halloween in such a descriptive manner, brilliant! Congratulations on winning. Well deserved.
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Date: 10/11/2023 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much for my placement. The paint is my own acrylic painting.
Date: 10/10/2023 7:49:00 AM
- A spooky night, indeed Eve - Well done :) - hugs
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Date: 10/8/2023 2:09:00 PM
Love it! Delightfully spooky.
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Date: 10/8/2023 6:49:00 AM
Ooh a spooky etheree.. if this is for the contest then I think Ink will love this one, she likes Halloween... Yours flows so well and i can feel the spooky nature of it..
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Date: 10/8/2023 1:34:00 AM
Loved your dark Halloween Etheree. So well constructed. with plenty of imagery. Blessings.
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Date: 10/8/2023 12:33:00 AM
So sweet Eve, it speaks to the season. So, I do have a wee joke for you, why do witches never win baseball games? Cause their bats always fly away!!!!! Hugs!!!
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Date: 10/7/2023 11:25:00 PM
Good spooky poem!
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