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Premiere Contest WinnerHalloween Night

Rose met a vampire on Halloween night,
     it was an unnatural death;
he took her in a forest without a fight,
          on the edge of town she took her last breath.

She lay waiting in the brittle leaves of deep red,
     her eyes looking peacefully to the sky;
it was a quiet death and now she was very dead, 
        a dark veil of hair fell across an open eye.

The stars twinkled down on this beautiful girl,
     she looked perfectly lovely and sleeping;
except she was dead and wearing a bloody pearl,
           two small wounds drained blood still seeping.

Inside her things were changing and she wanted to roam,
       but the paramedics draped her body in a white sheet; 
and took her to the town's funeral home,
            she waited-  then, she yelled trick or treat.

She left the funeral home to wander the street,
     on Halloween night she blended in well;
you would be unlucky if by chance this girl you meet,
           and still be alive in the morning with a story to tell.

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October 17, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/Halloween Night
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1072-105-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Halloween Night
sponsor, Tania Kitchin

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Thank you Jay for the visit and compliment, appreciate !
Moore Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Excellent job!
La France Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Thank you Tania, Janice, PS, Maureen, JP, Laura, and Line for visiting my poem with great comments and congratulations, appreciate ~
Gauthier Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Well penned. Congrats on your well deserved top win, Constance.
Leiser Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Brilliant story poem! Congrats on your top win, Constance! :)
Thomas Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations! nice one.... scary!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Awesome poem Constance! I LOVE it. Congratulations on your top trophy win! xomo
Awtry Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations :)
Canerdy Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 6:54 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WELL-DESERVED WIN! Janice
Kitchin Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 6:20 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win. I loved this and wanted more, excellent scary poem!
La France Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Thanks Victor, Carolyn and John for reading my spooky write and commenting, it gives me the creeps just to read it myself ~
Gondolf Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 10:01 AM
A spooky story of Halloween night, Constance, best of luck in the contest. John
Devonshire Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Ooooh, very spooky! Excellent detail about the girl's transition and having her wake up at the funeral home was a chilling twist. Indeed, pity the soul who comes in contact with her... Best wishes in the contest with this very creative entry! Hugs, Carolyn
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