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Rose met a vampire on Halloween night, it was an unnatural death; he took her in a forest without a fight, on the edge of town she took her last breath. She lay waiting in the brittle leaves of deep red, her eyes looking peacefully to the sky; it was a quiet death and now she was very dead, a dark veil of hair fell across an open eye. The stars twinkled down on this beautiful girl, she looked perfectly lovely and sleeping; except she was dead and wearing a bloody pearl, two small wounds drained blood still seeping. Inside her things were changing and she wanted to roam, but the paramedics draped her body in a white sheet; and took her to the town's funeral home, she waited- then, she yelled trick or treat. She left the funeral home to wander the street, on Halloween night she blended in well; you would be unlucky if by chance this girl you meet, and still be alive in the morning with a story to tell. _______________________________ October 17, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Halloween Night Copyright Protected, ID 18-1072-105-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Halloween Night sponsor, Tania Kitchin First Place

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Date: 11/14/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thank you Jay for the visit and compliment, appreciate !
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Date: 11/14/2018 3:19:00 PM
Excellent job!
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Date: 11/9/2018 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Tania, Janice, PS, Maureen, JP, Laura, and Line for visiting my poem with great comments and congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/3/2018 8:15:00 PM
Well penned. Congrats on your well deserved top win, Constance.
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Date: 11/1/2018 3:21:00 PM
Brilliant story poem! Congrats on your top win, Constance! :)
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Date: 11/1/2018 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations! nice one.... scary!
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Date: 11/1/2018 8:26:00 AM
Awesome poem Constance! I LOVE it. Congratulations on your top trophy win! xomo
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Date: 11/1/2018 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations :)
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Date: 11/1/2018 6:54:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WELL-DESERVED WIN! Janice
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Date: 11/1/2018 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win. I loved this and wanted more, excellent scary poem!
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Date: 10/19/2018 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Victor, Carolyn and John for reading my spooky write and commenting, it gives me the creeps just to read it myself ~
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Date: 10/18/2018 10:01:00 AM
A spooky story of Halloween night, Constance, best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 10/17/2018 9:55:00 AM
Ooooh, very spooky! Excellent detail about the girl's transition and having her wake up at the funeral home was a chilling twist. Indeed, pity the soul who comes in contact with her... Best wishes in the contest with this very creative entry! Hugs, Carolyn
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