Halloween Hand Me Downs

I was the youngest kid of eight
Halloween was never that great
Orange clown shoes were too big
An old purple horrendous witch's wig

My sisters tutu I that wouldn't use
My brothers cape smelled of doo doo
Superman pants that didn't latch
And that makeup covered eye patch

That Halloween I knocked on this door
The lady was laughing and kicked the floor
Her husband then came around to peek
Then laugh so hard his knees got weak

She said "Oh honey, let's give him the lot"
He agreed, only if I posed for a snapshot
She said "you stay right there, don't move"
I took off so fast, I lost my clown shoes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 4:18 AM
Congratulations on your win Mitch in Irma's "Halloween Costume Contest". Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 6:38 PM
Funny one Mitch..kind of sad too...congrats on your win. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Congrats Mitch on your big win in Irma's cool contest with this rare beauty entry my friend.. enjoy your win with luv..
Mehta Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win , Mitch
Harper Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 1:45 PM
lol, I like the line about smell best, don't they just, nice work, congrats on your win:)
Fraser Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Koolio Limerick Mitch, and well deserved of it's winning place in SKAT's contest >> James
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November 25, 2010 at 10:34 PM
MITCH, CONGRATULATIONA! and Sorry for judging my contest late. Once again I love the taste of my # 1-10 placements. Enjoyed the thought and smiles. Thanks so much for my contest entry, have your self a wonderful & bessed holiday~luv* SKAT
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November 20, 2010 at 8:59 PM
I wouldn't have stuck around either, Mitch. Great memory to have for Halloween and congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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November 20, 2010 at 5:04 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Mehta Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 3:31 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Mitch
Devonshire Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Did you ever go back to retrieve those shoes, Mitch? Cute story behind this poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 1:08 PM
lCongratulations on your win with this story of a diasterous Halloween. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Congrats Mitch on your big win in Paula's contest with this exceptional entry luv.. a perfect piece to express the theme... Happy Thanksgiving to u and yours my friend..with luv..
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Mitch. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 8:54 PM
Mitch, you did such an awesome job with this piece. I love the imagery, enjoy the week ahead ;) Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 8:34 PM
Congrats Mitch on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all today with luv...
Corazon Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 7:46 PM
HAPPY ALL HALLOWS EVE!
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 11:54 AM
May your week be one of good health, may your heart be full of love, and your life give you amazing inspiration for your writing. I enjoyed reading your exceptional poetry and thank you for sharing it Mitch. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:51 AM
Good luck if for the contest Mitch.. very well written on the theme luv.. enjoyed the storyline.. good luck my friend. hope all is well with u...
Culverhouse Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:58 AM
oh no... must have been a riot!! wish I had that shap shot.
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:08 AM
Funny and humorous write On Halloween hand me downs, Mitch
Nutter Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 2:59 AM
Left me laughing, would have loved to seen this get up. Excellent write.
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