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Halloween

The candle’s flickering orange light Loaned tension to the night, And from shadows cold and dark, gave purchase to the sight. A Spectre’s hand in vapour white, then pointed at each soul, an icy blast then dimmed the fire, And quenched the smouldering coal These whispered words in rasping voice, then echoed in the room ‘Each Halloween the hand of fate Appoints one to his doom.’ Panic played though terror stayed, all fleeing from the room, their frightened eyes stared spellbound, as the hand moved through the gloom. A sudden bolt of arcing light Then stole their panic’d breath As Mother said ‘take off that glove, You’ve scared the kids to death.’

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/6/2011 4:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dave. Great write. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/3/2011 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Halloween Fun" contest David an honor to share 1st Place with you. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:06:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, David! I thought this would be a winner. Kim
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Date: 10/2/2011 12:27:00 AM
Weel done, and congratulations on your win. Well done... would scar me too. Lee
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:59:00 PM
Great Goblins, Scooby! This is a terific fright!! Congrats on top spot in a very competitive contest. Love the parental comparison too! Gwendolen
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:46:00 PM
Really cute and typical of how mothers and fathers differ in their ways. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/1/2011 8:14:00 AM
LOL nice meter, story and end rhyme! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/25/2011 6:46:00 PM
Good one, David! Kim
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Date: 9/25/2011 8:11:00 AM
This guy I know.
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