Halloween

The candle’s flickering orange light Loaned tension to the night, And from shadows cold and dark, gave purchase to the sight. A Spectre’s hand in vapour white, then pointed at each soul, an icy blast then dimmed the fire, And quenched the smouldering coal These whispered words in rasping voice, then echoed in the room ‘Each Halloween the hand of fate Appoints one to his doom.’ Panic played though terror stayed, all fleeing from the room, their frightened eyes stared spellbound, as the hand moved through the gloom. A sudden bolt of arcing light Then stole their panic’d breath As Mother said ‘take off that glove, You’ve scared the kids to death.’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 4:38 PM
Congrats on your win, Dave. Great write. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Halloween Fun" contest David an honor to share 1st Place with you. Love, Carol
Merryman Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, David! I thought this would be a winner. Kim
Ramage Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 12:27 AM
Weel done, and congratulations on your win. Well done... would scar me too. Lee
Song Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 1:59 PM
Great Goblins, Scooby! This is a terific fright!! Congrats on top spot in a very competitive contest. Love the parental comparison too! Gwendolen
Johnson Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Really cute and typical of how mothers and fathers differ in their ways. Congratulations.
Guzzi Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 8:14 AM
LOL nice meter, story and end rhyme! Congrad's Light & Love
Merryman Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 6:46 PM
Good one, David! Kim
Lane Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 8:11 AM
This guy I know.
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