Halloween

The kids were having lots of fun,
Their bags of treats must weigh a ton,
Until a witch in hat
Turned into big black cat
To see how fast tricksters could run.











my category  Best Limerick formtook 2nd
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Brown Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations to you on your win Joyce in John Freeman's contest "Limerick""Choose your own subject and Create your own Category". Love, Carol
K. Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 2:58 AM
haha what a meanie witch but still so much fun!! congrats on your win with this Joyce :) -- nikko :)
Taylor Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 1:24 PM
Congrats, Joyce. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this fantastic write about Halloween... enjoy another biggie on this happy Sunday my friend... with luv..
Guzzi Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 5:50 AM
Yup That witch sure gottum! Glad to see you in the winning circle hon! Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Naughty witch taking the kids treats, funny dark Limerick Joyce. Congrats on your win in John's contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 11:24 PM
A bit of mystery in this one,Joyce, you place in the best Limerick category. This is very good. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 4:14 AM
Great magical act that witch performed...Intersting write....How much thought did it take to come up with that one..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
La France Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 7:40 PM
I enjoyed your limerick very much.. best of luck in the contest
Roberts Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 6:15 PM
loved it
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