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What is man that thou are mindful of him, or the son of man that thou visitest him?    Psalm 8 : 4

Hallelujah

Rising from a dust filled hand
Walking through such beauty grand
Offered the forbidden....and.....
Should you?

Perfect...you could never be
Tablets broken at your feet
One of ten, you couldn't keep...
Could you?

As promised, the transfer began
The wounded GOD......LOVE'S bloody hands
And still, you don't understand....
Do ya?

The shame was worn, there in your stead
The Father turned his saddened head
From His gift.....soon wrapped in red...
Sent to ya!   Hallelujah!

Will I be once again denied ?
Come thrust your hand into my side
Your unbelief is crucified!
Power to ya!  Hallelujah!

Ages pass and in despair
darkness burning everywhere
You don't know what you're doing there
Do Ya?

Awakened from your sweaty trance
Another day...another chance
And to a dusty book, you glance
Should ya?  

The pages turn through the battle scene
The enemy is strong and keen!!
Just ask the Lamb to intervene
Would you?  Hallelujah!!

You pierced his hands, His back you beat
Now you've become his hands and feet!
Go tell the world of love so sweet!!
Gave to ya!!  Hallelujah!!

Hallelujah!!  Hallelujah!!
Hallelujah!!  Hallelujah!!
Hallelujah!!  Hallelujah!!
Hallelujah!!  Amen


With a heartfelt praise to YAHWEH
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Williams Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 10:23 PM
Perfect words of yours Chuck written to my all time favourite song Hallelujah. I really enjoyed your version better. Your words are so much better. ...Maria
Melugin Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Thank you Maria! That melody is amazing! Hallelujah!!
Wanter Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:12 PM
I really enjoyed reading this, Chuck!
Melugin Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 2:28 PM
Sunlite, My sincere thanks for your comment...makes me glad. chuck
Warrior Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Your poem has reached YAHWEH...He/She is pleased I'm sure...great lyric Chuck...god bless...^WW^
Melugin Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Thanks Warrior, Your words are greatly appreciated, chuck
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Great poem, Chuck! Very moving lyrical testament of faith. The spiritual energy is invigorating. Deeply inspirational and absolutely elevating. Supernova poetry! Going into the fave file ... an instant classic. Love and joy always.
Melugin Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Thanks Freddie, You comment is so uplifting to my soul. My best to you, chuck
One Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:38 AM
Nice one Chuck
Melugin Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:40 PM
Thanks very much Silent, chuck
Hamilton Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 7:58 PM
Amen he died for us we need to be thankful and praise Jah Hallel(praise in hebrew) Jah shortened form of God's name. I love this spiritual write a wake up call to all. Coincidentally in church yesterday we studied the theme praise Jah. Great timing for a praiseworthy song, loved it Chuck!
Melugin Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Thanks so much John for the wonderful comment, chuck
Smith Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 12:15 PM
Great poem Chuck.. hallelujah
Melugin Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Thanks very much, Tim. I appreciate your review, chuck
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