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What is man that thou are mindful of him, or the son of man that thou visitest him?    Psalm 8 : 4

Rising from a dust filled hand Walking through such beauty grand Offered the forbidden....and..... Should you? Perfect...you could never be Tablets broken at your feet One of ten, you couldn't keep... Could you? As promised, the transfer began The wounded GOD......LOVE'S bloody hands And still, you don't understand.... Do ya? The shame was worn, there in your stead The Father turned his saddened head From His gift.....soon wrapped in red... Sent to ya! Hallelujah! Will I be once again denied ? Come thrust your hand into my side Your unbelief is crucified! Power to ya! Hallelujah! Ages pass and in despair darkness burning everywhere You don't know what you're doing there Do Ya? Awakened from your sweaty trance Another day...another chance And to a dusty book, you glance Should ya? The pages turn through the battle scene The enemy is strong and keen!! Just ask the Lamb to intervene Would you? Hallelujah!! You pierced his hands, His back you beat Now you've become his hands and feet! Go tell the world of love so sweet!! Gave to ya!! Hallelujah!! Hallelujah!! Hallelujah!! Hallelujah!! Hallelujah!! Hallelujah!! Hallelujah!! Hallelujah!! Amen With a heartfelt praise to YAHWEH Copyright and all rights reserved.

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Date: 11/1/2017 10:23:00 PM
Perfect words of yours Chuck written to my all time favourite song Hallelujah. I really enjoyed your version better. Your words are so much better. ...Maria
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/18/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Maria! That melody is amazing! Hallelujah!!
Date: 9/27/2017 6:12:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this, Chuck!
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Date: 9/28/2017 2:28:00 PM
Sunlite, My sincere thanks for your comment...makes me glad. chuck
Date: 9/21/2017 9:32:00 AM
Your poem has reached YAHWEH...He/She is pleased I'm sure...great lyric Chuck...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/22/2017 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Warrior, Your words are greatly appreciated, chuck
Date: 9/21/2017 8:57:00 AM
Great poem, Chuck! Very moving lyrical testament of faith. The spiritual energy is invigorating. Deeply inspirational and absolutely elevating. Supernova poetry! Going into the fave file ... an instant classic. Love and joy always.
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Date: 9/22/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thanks Freddie, You comment is so uplifting to my soul. My best to you, chuck
Date: 9/19/2017 3:38:00 AM
Nice one Chuck
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 9/19/2017 6:40:00 PM
Thanks very much Silent, chuck
Date: 9/18/2017 7:58:00 PM
Amen he died for us we need to be thankful and praise Jah Hallel(praise in hebrew) Jah shortened form of God's name. I love this spiritual write a wake up call to all. Coincidentally in church yesterday we studied the theme praise Jah. Great timing for a praiseworthy song, loved it Chuck!
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Date: 9/19/2017 6:39:00 PM
Thanks so much John for the wonderful comment, chuck
Date: 9/18/2017 12:15:00 PM
Great poem Chuck.. hallelujah
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 9/18/2017 4:43:00 PM
Thanks very much, Tim. I appreciate your review, chuck

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