Hallelujah

Twas the Eve of this Christmas,
We were traveling far,
When in the dark sky
I noticed a bright shining star.

I imagined the Manger,
Where Jesus was born,
Were alerted to danger
As the road signs did warn.

The bright star we followed,
Far above in the night
In my mind’s eye saw Shepherds,
And Three Kings giving us light .

Listening to joyful Carols,
Each one we both sung,
As we neared our destination,
Heard church bells being rung.

We noticed a small church,
Standing all on it’s own
A midnight mass in progress,
Singing heard from it’s dome.

We went in and watched,
A nativity in play,
The Christ child was born
It is now Christmas Day.

Competition Entry
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Date 2021/12/30
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 6:11 AM
A lovely Christmas experience.... So you were not simply witnessing but living through the nativity experience ! So beautifully written Jennifer !
Sands Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 12:45 PM
Hi Jennifer. I thought I had commented in this beautiful poem. I love it. I hope all is well. Happy New Year :)
Deo Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 8:46 AM
Praise the Lord, daily, though I came later than 25th December. Our imagination plus Scripture makes for wonderful HolyDays. I read some of the recent poems but my glitches with my device are myriad & entertaining. God is good, & so are u Jennifer. Eireene
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 3:44 PM
such a sweet poem on people doing a nativity scene. I think it's done less and less these days.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 1:50 PM
You present the nativity scene in your own unique way and it is lovely Jennifer. New year blessings xxo
Pandit Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 12:28 PM
Your poem warms the hearts of many, Jennifer. You told the story brilliantly my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 10:32 AM
A "Beautiful" story/write. "Love It" I wish you would write more. Have a blessed day and New Year.............
Watt Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 9:41 AM
Hi Jenn, you have made the Nativity so personal as you imagine the scenes playing out before you. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. God bless you in 2022. Hugs ~ John
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January 3, 2022 at 3:15 PM
Hello Jennifer, I have not seen your poetry for a while, and I am wondering if you are okay. Happy New Year. Darlene Hugs.
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January 3, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Such a !lovely incarnation piece Jennifer, with nice rhyme and flow with really good insightfulness too. Have a blessed 2022, Gordon
Ball Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 9:13 PM
Oh Lovely in every way from start to finish. A fave for me. God Bless and Merry Christmas and a much blessed New Year to you and yours. JB
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 6:12 PM
- Lovely written, dear Jenny :) - Good luck in the contest ;) - Happy New Year ! - hugs and love// Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 4:21 PM
Beautifully crafted of the event.
Awtry Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 6:04 PM
What a precious story you've told. :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 3:45 PM
Hello Jennifer, I thought I would wish you a Happy New Year. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Brown Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 12:46 PM
I never get tired reading about "Jesus"being born. Loved the story, nicely penned ~ Debra
Callus Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 7:22 AM
That is a lovely and fitting poem for this time of year, jenny! I also like the swift flowing lines. ~ Hope you had a lovely Christmas, my friend. Sending you and your loved ones all the very best wishes for the new year...may it be better than 2021!! Warm regards & hugs // paul
Laurie Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 4:56 PM
Hello Jennifer ... yes, you have portrayed the nativity scene well in fine poetic form. You've explained it so well Jennifer - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 4:54 AM
Lovely retelling of the nativity Jennifer. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and hope you have good health and happiness in the New Year. Tom
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