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Seeking love, we choose a mirror but reflections display error, in as not quite that what we sought, as of cravings our ego brought, which to shifts, moment to moment, rapidly sinking joy quotient, for what’s on offer, comes and goes, being not the bliss, our soul knows, ever present in God’s domain ~ ours for asking, when ego’s slain. 01-June-2022

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Date: 6/1/2022 5:09:00 AM
Ego is the biggest block in receiving grace and bliss. I think in most of your poems, you reiterate the same idea...! I too feel that ego to a great extent is the cause of many an evil ! Beautifully composed, Seeker friend .
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Date: 6/1/2022 8:42:00 AM
Ego too is a word often meaning different things for different people
Date: 5/31/2022 10:13:00 PM
Indeed God should always come first.
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