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Hair Today, Gone Tomorrow

Hair today, gone tomorrow, it's starting to thin really fast Thought I'd be one of those centurions with locks down past my ass Think again, old fellow You're starting to turn yellow Don't want to pass on till my youthful appearance does pass © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 10/21/2015 7:07:00 AM
I'm loosing my hair, what do I care. I got all my looks. women beware!!! Trudeau and the Blue Jays winning, what a treat for old Saint Nick! Gmorning Santa Jack go JaYYYYYYYYssss!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/21/2015 9:40:00 AM
Jays are the edge but have been there before... KC is tough! Their pitching is much superior!!! Cheers!
Date: 10/21/2015 6:49:00 AM
You've got about another 150 years...so hang on .....
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/21/2015 9:38:00 AM
Holy crap! That'll make me 230 years old! Uh no thanks!!! LOL
Date: 10/20/2015 4:02:00 PM
Hair once flowing down to his back....the days I remember of dear Santa Jack....its now thining out...but don't you pout.....a full head of he carries there in his sack
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/21/2015 9:34:00 AM
Help! I'm no longer a youthful, virile, handsome young hulk! Do you know of a cure??? I'll pay big dollars!
Date: 10/20/2015 2:30:00 PM
Long as Cathie loves you jack who cares about hair and look at Patrick Stewart - women find him very attractive mmmmm i rest my case:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/21/2015 9:31:00 AM
You DON'T want to see me bald like Patrick! LOL Love, Santa!!! ((hugs)) xoxox
Date: 10/20/2015 2:12:00 PM
Had trouble with my computer this morn... In the meantime hope your hair need not be mourned... From what I've seen you can toot your hair horn... It's beautifully shorn... Santa Jack has no reason to be forlorn...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/21/2015 9:30:00 AM
Barber must be wondering whether I'm still alive!!! It seems it stopped growing!!! LOL xoxox
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Carol Eastman
Date: 10/20/2015 2:13:00 PM
PS. I think your hair has had better staying power than mine... LOL...