Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Hair Today, Gone Tomorrow

Hair today, gone tomorrow, it's starting to thin really fast
Thought I'd be one of those centurions with locks down past my ass
Think again, old fellow
You're starting to turn yellow
Don't want to pass on till my youthful appearance does pass


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Michael Tor October 21, 2015 at 7:07 AM I'm loosing my hair, what do I care. I got all my looks. women beware!!! Trudeau and the Blue Jays winning, what a treat for old Saint Nick! Gmorning Santa Jack go JaYYYYYYYYssss! Jack Ellison October 21, 2015 at 9:40 AM Jays are the edge but have been there before... KC is tough! Their pitching is much superior!!! Cheers!

Judy Konos October 21, 2015 at 6:49 AM You've got about another 150 years...so hang on ..... Jack Ellison October 21, 2015 at 9:38 AM Holy crap! That'll make me 230 years old! Uh no thanks!!! LOL

Tim Smith October 20, 2015 at 4:02 PM Hair once flowing down to his back....the days I remember of dear Santa Jack....its now thining out...but don't you pout.....a full head of he carries there in his sack Jack Ellison October 21, 2015 at 9:34 AM Help! I'm no longer a youthful, virile, handsome young hulk! Do you know of a cure??? I'll pay big dollars!

Jan Allison October 20, 2015 at 2:30 PM Long as Cathie loves you jack who cares about hair and look at Patrick Stewart - women find him very attractive mmmmm i rest my case:-) hugs Jan xxx Jack Ellison October 21, 2015 at 9:31 AM You DON'T want to see me bald like Patrick! LOL Love, Santa!!! ((hugs)) xoxox

Carol Eastman October 20, 2015 at 2:12 PM Had trouble with my computer this morn... In the meantime hope your hair need not be mourned... From what I've seen you can toot your hair horn... It's beautifully shorn... Santa Jack has no reason to be forlorn... Jack Ellison October 21, 2015 at 9:30 AM Barber must be wondering whether I'm still alive!!! It seems it stopped growing!!! LOL xoxox Carol Eastman October 20, 2015 at 2:13 PM PS. I think your hair has had better staying power than mine... LOL...