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Hail the Creator

darkness overhead ripple effect goes berserk chaos reigns downward surface tension in tatters insanity on the pond By David Kavanagh # hailstorm #

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/14/2021 4:02:00 PM
Great images you created in just a few lines, David. I hear the sound of storm in your words.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/14/2021 9:44:00 PM
Heya Vijay, yes I was trying to recapture the madness I’d witnessed, in a hailstorm on a pond, the surface seemed to be boiling, and out of control, cheers David

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