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splendor flutters by caressing lilies so sweet - dainty butterflies

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 6/10/2010 12:40:00 PM

This is quite lovely. Congratulations on this very delicate sounding poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2010 9:19:00 PM

Just beautiful and darling! Congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2010 3:33:00 PM

Congrats Joe on another big win.. u are needing a truck to collect all your wins ..good job Joe and enjoy ... luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Rick Parise

Date: 6/2/2010 2:39:00 PM

very nice #9 placement in my contest my friend!! Enjoyed~Rick

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/2/2010 2:37:00 PM

I love the fact that you stayed true to the form with your cut line. well done and congrats on your success in the contest. BG

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 6/2/2010 12:49:00 PM

The innocence of nature, that of which we all know of but seldom take time to witness. A reminder of the frailty and beauty placed before the eye of those who chose to witness wonders.

Amy Green

Date: 6/1/2010 6:39:00 PM

Very nice one, Joe. GL in the contest.