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Haiku: Traditional 4

colors green, yellow, red boxed candy just out of reach cautionary signs Brian Johnston August 15, 2014

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Date: 8/25/2014 4:48:00 PM
I love haiku so thought i would visit one more of your poems and then catch up on comments. I like that way of relating candy to the yellow and red signs of traffic. I want green light on all my chocolates!
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