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Haiku Number Four

Snowscape's white dazzling
Twilight falls -there's but a glow
Robin red breast sleeps

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James Fraser

February 22, 2010 at 10:29 AM

Many congratulations to you for your poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 22, 2010 at 6:17 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Deirdre. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol

February 21, 2010 at 7:33 AM

Good use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your well deserved honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

February 3, 2009 at 1:45 PM

Wake that robin. THINK SPRING!!! Vince

Debbie Guzzi

January 16, 2009 at 2:44 PM

Like blood on the snow...shiver. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Michael Degenhardt

January 16, 2009 at 4:57 AM

You successfully manage to create such vivid imagery while keeping the well defined style. A wonderful read my poet friend. Michael

Raul Moreno

January 15, 2009 at 5:35 PM

Nice 4th haiku, I love the simplicity of your work...Raul

Keith Bickerstaffe

January 15, 2009 at 8:27 AM

I love the contrast of red and white... robins really do stand out in the snow. BRAVO Deirdre! Best wishes, Keith (PS have you read Dylan's 'A Child's Christmas In Wales?' There's a passage about a dead robin 'all but one of his fires out.' ...stunning!)

January 12, 2009 at 1:39 PM

Wonderful use of imagery in this poem. Nice use of color to connect the piece. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Have a nice day. Karen