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Haiku No 19

menacing the sky
    a cottage calls with all hope ~
          in our room all smiles

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/29/2023 6:19:00 PM

An outstanding Haiku. It creates an atmosphere of comfort with excellent imagery . Pangir

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2023 5:25:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this creative work of yours. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 10/24/2023 4:16:00 AM

Nice haiku Victor. Few words that well express what a home means: Our shelter. Well done. Blessings!

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/22/2023 11:00:00 AM

We're so lucky to have comfort and homes that protect from the dark storms deluge! Made me think, dear Victor. Blessings

Eve Roper

Date: 10/21/2023 11:18:00 PM

Yes, our safe place our home. Great Haiku Many blessings my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2023 3:19:00 PM

nothing like home sweet home in the midst of a storm.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/21/2023 2:08:00 PM

Victor, a charming haiku.

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/21/2023 7:10:00 AM

Menacing skies are always frightening -- shifting, oscillating overcast with season and man's temperament as well. Great read! Lots in a small package.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 10/21/2023 5:43:00 AM

Beautiful imagery... loved it...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/21/2023 5:39:00 AM

Happy images--much joy gleams through!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/21/2023 4:04:00 AM

Beautiful haiku so well crafted and woven with such beautiful imagery. A cottage that calls of hope nothing as serene as that i suppose. Absolutely loved reading this haiku

Silent One

Date: 10/21/2023 3:01:00 AM

sounds great Victor... we all need a warm shelter to keep us from the storm.. lots of flooding here in the UK..

Maria Williams

Date: 10/21/2023 2:13:00 AM

A great Haiku, Victor. A lot of imagery in it, but all I can see are your smiles. Love and Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 10/20/2023 9:50:00 PM

When it is about to rain, being in the comfort of a shelter brings smiles to our face. I rarely see you writing haikus. Beautiful one dear friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/20/2023 5:37:00 PM

Out of the storm, safety and smiles!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/20/2023 3:35:00 PM

as long as your smiling, and lighting up the room all is good Victor , love this

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/20/2023 2:16:00 PM

Smiles in the room of the cottage, sheltered from the gloomy clouds. Your haiku radiates warmth and peace :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/20/2023 1:40:00 PM

A lovely Haiku write. Smiles are wonderful. Have a great weekend with a smile.....................

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2023 1:19:00 PM

I can relate big time Víctor we are cosied up with yet another storm here. hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/20/2023 12:28:00 PM

Victor, your description of a cozy room amidst tumultuous weather is filled with vivid and delightful details. Your craftsmanship in capturing the essence of this scene is truly remarkable. Blessings dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2023 12:16:00 PM

- Great written, Victor :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/20/2023 11:53:00 AM

Very pleasant images of a cozy home in wild weather. Wonderfully wrought, Victor.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/20/2023 10:41:00 AM

Hello Victor, In bad weather itis safe to stay indoors. We smile that we are not outdoors in the bad weather. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/20/2023 9:08:00 AM

A very intriguing haiku poem, dear Victor! Your wordplay is captivating with "menacing the sky" One can actually picture that ambience.. Brilliantly crafted!

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