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Haiku Iii

fall church camp cabin daytime bat hangs upside down-- come nightfall he preys

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/22/2020 5:57:00 PM

Neat twist on words!

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/22/2020 8:26:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/22/2020 1:51:00 AM

How clever is this poetry gem, love it.

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/22/2020 6:59:00 AM

Thanks, Harry.

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 10/21/2020 10:01:00 AM

Thanks, Regina, and God bless you, too. God is good.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/21/2020 8:50:00 AM

Wonderful write... the first I've read on a bat :) God bless you friend

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/22/2020 6:58:00 AM

Thanks, Regina.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/18/2020 3:07:00 PM

I love your play on words, Carol...creative! Regards // paul

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/18/2020 4:34:00 PM

Thanks, Paul.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2020 10:07:00 AM

great word play Carol:-) hugs jan xx

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/14/2020 10:11:00 AM

Thanks, Jan. It was fun to come up with a word-play haiku.

Silent One

Date: 10/14/2020 8:50:00 AM

Nice one Carol...

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/14/2020 9:09:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2020 12:59:00 PM

I like the play on religious word pray for it being a church camp!! Nice one.

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/13/2020 5:36:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/11/2020 12:00:00 PM

Oh, great word play on church/preys - am adding to my Faves!

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 10/11/2020 1:44:00 PM

Thanks, Michelle. I had fun with this one.