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surgical changes value of the life cycle human dignity 24-04-2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) www.howmanysyllables.com haiku - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mick Talbot 1st place in the contest

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Date: 4/30/2018 8:27:00 AM
A very thought provoking haiku Sunshine. Congratulations. Tom.
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Date: 4/30/2018 12:19:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2018 10:54:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your placement. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/30/2018 12:18:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/29/2018 6:09:00 PM
Nice one, Anne lise, Congrats to you.
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Date: 4/30/2018 12:18:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/28/2018 12:38:00 PM
Great haiku ... Congratulations ...
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Date: 4/28/2018 12:42:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/28/2018 11:57:00 AM
Wow an awesome haiku. love phyl
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Date: 4/28/2018 12:42:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/27/2018 2:28:00 PM
I see this has a deeper meaning. It is a thought provoking haiku that catches the reader. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/27/2018 2:31:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Sian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/27/2018 12:11:00 PM
Knew this would be a winner. Congratulations, Sunshine! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2018 12:13:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/27/2018 9:19:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/27/2018 11:47:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/27/2018 7:48:00 AM
You've simply created a story about life cycle of human with this tiny form, Anne-Lise. Awesome. Congrats! ;)
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Date: 4/27/2018 11:47:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/27/2018 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this thought-provoking haiku. Well done.
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Date: 4/27/2018 11:46:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/26/2018 10:59:00 PM
Beautiful, Sunshine. Congrats on your winning poem.
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Date: 4/27/2018 11:46:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/26/2018 12:07:00 PM
A very deep haiku Anne-Lise...best of luck my friend...stay in the light...^WW^
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Date: 4/26/2018 12:15:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/26/2018 7:08:00 AM
AWESOME! TRULY AWESOME!
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Date: 4/26/2018 7:56:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/26/2018 5:04:00 AM
Good Morning Anne. Not only is your attached image exquisite your entry and words themselves are as well. Your words make the reader pause. Well done with the format. Best of luck with the contest.
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Date: 4/26/2018 7:56:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Lisa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/25/2018 5:14:00 PM
You wrap up medical treatment here in a neat poetic passage! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/26/2018 12:33:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Matthew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/25/2018 1:44:00 PM
Deep and beautiful Anne lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/25/2018 1:56:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/25/2018 8:40:00 AM
Clever and entertaining Anne-Lise.
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Date: 4/25/2018 11:39:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/24/2018 8:05:00 PM
Deep write, Sunshine, luck in the contest hugs Eve
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Date: 4/25/2018 11:38:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/24/2018 3:09:00 PM
Deep and beautiful at the same time, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 4/25/2018 11:38:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/24/2018 2:13:00 PM
Amazingly deep haiku, Anne-Lise! You are a master at this :)
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Date: 4/24/2018 2:59:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/24/2018 2:01:00 PM
sublime in your delivery of your thoughts, anne... happy huggs
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Date: 4/24/2018 2:57:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/24/2018 1:56:00 PM
Truly quite profound,, Sunshine, and I think it can be taken in more than one way. Love the way you keep me guessing and that picture is amazing as well. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/24/2018 2:57:00 PM
- Every drop is part of our world, Carolyn :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/24/2018 1:54:00 PM
Ooh that's deep. Clever haiku :) my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Date: 4/24/2018 2:55:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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