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Haiku 57 about the rose

wings flutter on a moist petal rose nectar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/6/2014 4:16:00 AM
Read like Chanel number 57 instead 5 :-) Dutch greetings Elly
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Date: 3/19/2014 3:35:00 PM
Super...Lovely...creative...rose nectar...
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Date: 3/12/2014 7:37:00 PM
Short and sweet! Peace & Love Matthew Ansih
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Date: 3/4/2014 3:11:00 PM
Another special haiku; it never lets you down. I find it very sensuous. / paul
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Date: 3/4/2014 11:45:00 AM
A sweet sanctuary. J.A.B.
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Date: 2/28/2014 2:14:00 PM
Nice image, hon. I know things are rough for you right now... it is best to be with family right now. So lovely of you to drop by and let us know how you are doing. I'll keep you in my prayers, Dear... hope the sun shines for you soon, Suncatcher. HUGS!
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Date: 2/28/2014 11:00:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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Date: 2/27/2014 3:44:00 AM
Very beautiful imagery. An enjoyable read.
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Date: 2/26/2014 7:38:00 PM
Beautiful terse write dear poet ! Many prayers for your father-in-law my friend. Have a blessed week....much love, james
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Date: 2/26/2014 2:45:00 PM
too beautiful for words !!! Gorgeous haiku, Charmaine!! ps......Will will pray for your father-in-law too, and hope to hear he is soon on the road to recovery. Many blessings to you dear, and to your family!
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Date: 2/26/2014 12:25:00 PM
This brings such a delicate image to my mind, Charma, I really enjoy your haiku... how are you? How about your father-in-law? I just read your comments below, I pray he is going to be better...
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Date: 2/26/2014 10:01:00 AM
charms!.. hope you are feeling better.. hugging you!
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Date: 2/26/2014 1:09:00 AM
HI, there, Charma. it was nice to see you stop by today. Sure love your haiku writing. You rock at it.
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Date: 2/25/2014 10:51:00 AM
- I love roses ......... oh ... so sweet - Beautiful!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2014 8:15:00 AM
Nice Charmaine... Very nice... Verlena
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Date: 2/21/2014 2:10:00 PM
charms!!.. missing you and your new writes.. have a great friday!.. hope you are good!..huggs
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Date: 2/21/2014 12:24:00 PM
Charma, excellent....
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Date: 2/21/2014 12:03:00 AM
A rose by any other name...
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Date: 2/19/2014 1:47:00 AM
A great haiku.
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Date: 2/18/2014 8:15:00 PM
The rose is my favorite flower; a great haiku!
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Date: 2/18/2014 10:18:00 AM
just right! you go gal! Light & Love
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Date: 2/14/2014 9:51:00 AM
I don't believe I have ever heard so much said in a poem of eight little words. And this is so exquisite, too. Can't tell you how pleased I am that you had such a good experience with my poems. I'll have to return the favor.
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Date: 2/12/2014 1:11:00 PM
That is why I love these smaller forms. With so little said, such vivid pictures are formed! Well done!!Asavvy1
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Date: 2/3/2014 5:21:00 PM
Although this is not my type of poem I did enjoy it alot read it twice to be honest my dear. Take care and keep up the great work. cheri
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Date: 2/3/2014 2:18:00 PM
This is simply sexy Haiku, almost erotic in its imagery. Bravo, Poet!
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