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Haiku 57 About the Rose

wings flutter

on a moist  petal

 rose nectar

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Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/19/2014 3:35:00 PM

Super...Lovely...creative...rose nectar...

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/12/2014 7:37:00 PM

Short and sweet! Peace & Love Matthew Ansih

Paul Callus

Date: 3/4/2014 3:11:00 PM

Another special haiku; it never lets you down. I find it very sensuous. / paul

Justin Bordner

Date: 3/4/2014 11:45:00 AM

A sweet sanctuary. J.A.B.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 2/28/2014 2:14:00 PM

Nice image, hon. I know things are rough for you right now... it is best to be with family right now. So lovely of you to drop by and let us know how you are doing. I'll keep you in my prayers, Dear... hope the sun shines for you soon, Suncatcher. HUGS!

Funom Makama

Date: 2/28/2014 11:00:00 AM

Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/27/2014 3:44:00 AM

Very beautiful imagery. An enjoyable read.

James Peranteau

Date: 2/26/2014 7:38:00 PM

Beautiful terse write dear poet ! Many prayers for your father-in-law my friend. Have a blessed week....much love, james

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/26/2014 2:45:00 PM

too beautiful for words !!! Gorgeous haiku, Charmaine!! ps......Will will pray for your father-in-law too, and hope to hear he is soon on the road to recovery. Many blessings to you dear, and to your family!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/26/2014 12:25:00 PM

This brings such a delicate image to my mind, Charma, I really enjoy your haiku... how are you? How about your father-in-law? I just read your comments below, I pray he is going to be better...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2014 10:01:00 AM

charms!.. hope you are feeling better.. hugging you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2014 1:09:00 AM

HI, there, Charma. it was nice to see you stop by today. Sure love your haiku writing. You rock at it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2014 10:51:00 AM

- I love roses ......... oh ... so sweet - Beautiful!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 2/24/2014 8:15:00 AM

Nice Charmaine... Very nice... Verlena

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/21/2014 2:10:00 PM

charms!!.. missing you and your new writes.. have a great friday!.. hope you are good!..huggs

David Williams

Date: 2/21/2014 12:24:00 PM

Charma, excellent....

Dominique Johnson

Date: 2/21/2014 12:03:00 AM

A rose by any other name...

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/19/2014 1:47:00 AM

A great haiku.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/18/2014 8:15:00 PM

The rose is my favorite flower; a great haiku!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/18/2014 10:18:00 AM

just right! you go gal! Light & Love

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 2/14/2014 9:51:00 AM

I don't believe I have ever heard so much said in a poem of eight little words. And this is so exquisite, too. Can't tell you how pleased I am that you had such a good experience with my poems. I'll have to return the favor.