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haiku 39

in the tidal pool small crabs walk on shining stones – a dog barks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/23/2013 10:24:00 PM
This has nice imagery. I can imagine I'm standing there on the beach. Thank you for the experience. -Gary
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Date: 5/15/2013 4:11:00 PM
Nice imagery. Situation is caught nicely. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/28/2013 9:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest. Nicely done Deb love phyl
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Date: 4/25/2013 10:41:00 PM
I get it now Deb. Congrats for this great win.
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Date: 4/24/2013 8:06:00 PM
Debbie, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/24/2013 4:45:00 PM
Congrats. Deb....Seren
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Date: 4/24/2013 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie, lovely image. Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/24/2013 3:31:00 PM
Big congrats, Debs!! Love the image.
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Date: 4/24/2013 11:09:00 AM
I could see this perfectly with my mind's eye! I wasn't surprised at all to see your poem at the top, Debbie. After all, you're the one who taught me how to write a proper haiku! Congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 4/23/2013 3:49:00 PM
Congrats on your grand win.
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Date: 4/23/2013 3:37:00 PM
This is the kind of haiku l love Deb. Big congrats on your awesome win!
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Date: 4/23/2013 12:36:00 PM
A perfect picture Debbie...congratulations
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Date: 4/23/2013 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie Excellent image and feelings evoked. SuZ
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Date: 4/23/2013 9:17:00 AM
I can picture it as if I am there! :) love it! congrats!
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Date: 4/23/2013 9:06:00 AM
Congrats Debbie!...and thanks for the dream interpretation...lol.
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Date: 4/21/2013 4:05:00 PM
love this,Debs - congrats on your wins. So glad you liked my haiku but I know I've a lot to learn before I'm this good
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Date: 4/21/2013 12:54:00 PM
I think this may be my favorite so far. Crystal clear and beautiful, excellently transporting. ~Jeremy
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Date: 4/20/2013 4:37:00 PM
Your haiku are always exquisite Ma
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Date: 4/19/2013 2:58:00 PM
- Excellent, Debbie ! - Have a pleasant weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2013 1:08:00 AM
I can sure picture it!!! Nice mixture of two senses used.
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Date: 4/17/2013 12:37:00 PM
I'm a gonna stick my feet in the sand and enjoy this one. Love, daver
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Date: 4/17/2013 9:16:00 AM
love it!........if this was my dog.....he would end up with that crab grabbing his nose! (he's been bitten twice by a rattlesnake for sticking his nose into the wrong places......hmm and they say curiousity killed the cat? in our case it's the dog who's in jeapordy!
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Date: 4/16/2013 11:31:00 PM
Excellent...thanks
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Date: 4/16/2013 9:55:00 PM
Very cool Debbie....
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Date: 4/16/2013 5:35:00 PM
And if it's my dog, she tries to eat the crab after...heh.
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