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Haiku 39

in the tidal pool small crabs walk on shining stones – a dog barks

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Gary Watkins

Date: 11/23/2013 10:24:00 PM

This has nice imagery. I can imagine I'm standing there on the beach. Thank you for the experience. -Gary

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/15/2013 4:11:00 PM

Nice imagery. Situation is caught nicely. Loved always, bl

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/28/2013 9:54:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the contest. Nicely done Deb love phyl

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/25/2013 10:41:00 PM

I get it now Deb. Congrats for this great win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:06:00 PM

Debbie, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Seren Roberts

Date: 4/24/2013 4:45:00 PM

Congrats. Deb....Seren

Richard D Seal

Date: 4/24/2013 3:39:00 PM

Congratulations Debbie, lovely image. Take care, Richard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2013 3:31:00 PM

Big congrats, Debs!! Love the image.

Heather Ober

Date: 4/24/2013 11:09:00 AM

I could see this perfectly with my mind's eye! I wasn't surprised at all to see your poem at the top, Debbie. After all, you're the one who taught me how to write a proper haiku! Congrats on your win in my contest :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/23/2013 3:49:00 PM

Congrats on your grand win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/23/2013 3:37:00 PM

This is the kind of haiku l love Deb. Big congrats on your awesome win!

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 12:36:00 PM

A perfect picture Debbie...congratulations

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/23/2013 11:38:00 AM

Congratulations Debbie Excellent image and feelings evoked. SuZ

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/23/2013 9:17:00 AM

I can picture it as if I am there! :) love it! congrats!

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/23/2013 9:06:00 AM

Congrats Debbie!...and thanks for the dream interpretation...lol.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/21/2013 4:05:00 PM

love this,Debs - congrats on your wins. So glad you liked my haiku but I know I've a lot to learn before I'm this good

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/21/2013 12:54:00 PM

I think this may be my favorite so far. Crystal clear and beautiful, excellently transporting. ~Jeremy

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/20/2013 4:37:00 PM

Your haiku are always exquisite Ma

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2013 2:58:00 PM

- Excellent, Debbie ! - Have a pleasant weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2013 1:08:00 AM

I can sure picture it!!! Nice mixture of two senses used.

Daver Austin

Date: 4/17/2013 12:37:00 PM

I'm a gonna stick my feet in the sand and enjoy this one. Love, daver

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/17/2013 9:16:00 AM

love it!........if this was my dog.....he would end up with that crab grabbing his nose! (he's been bitten twice by a rattlesnake for sticking his nose into the wrong places......hmm and they say curiousity killed the cat? in our case it's the dog who's in jeapordy!

Judy Konos

Date: 4/16/2013 11:31:00 PM

Excellent...thanks

Donna Jones

Date: 4/16/2013 9:55:00 PM

Very cool Debbie....

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/16/2013 5:35:00 PM

And if it's my dog, she tries to eat the crab after...heh.