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Haiku 29

an open portal the moon lies in a pink sky -- snores sound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Joann Grisetti
Date: 1/1/2013 8:51:00 AM
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I am really enjoying these poems from your recent trip. Must have been very inspirational.
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Kash Poet
Date: 12/30/2012 12:58:00 PM
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Hey Very nice!Happy New Year!!
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 12/30/2012 12:22:00 PM
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do they echo.... those snores?
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/30/2012 5:31:00 AM
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ow how loove your haiku dear Ma.Happy New Year with big hugs...ku hai :).Thanks for all your help re haiku.. X x
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Harry Horsman
Date: 12/30/2012 2:09:00 AM
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not only visual, but sound, Happy New Year, Debbie, like this
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Rick Parise
Date: 12/29/2012 5:10:00 PM
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I see the imagery!!!NICE!!~ Gezzzzzzzz I guess I need to pay attention......Typing away in dream land!!!!U Have soupmail!!!Thank you-
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Mehnaz Veetil
Date: 12/29/2012 9:12:00 AM
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Missed your poems.... Nice haiku. Funny too. Love, Mehnaz.
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 12/29/2012 6:24:00 AM
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SHeesh! Tried to comment to blogs, to send a mail to Soup and kept getting that freaking 500 message! Hope soup fixes it soon. okay, will try again to comment on your blog.. it worked HERE.. there???
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 12/29/2012 6:23:00 AM
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Trying to comment. Does this work?
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 12/29/2012 1:49:00 AM
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It's a real haiku, for many haikus posted on the Net are not haikus...
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Rollo West
Date: 12/28/2012 9:23:00 PM
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Hi Debbie, gotta love this one. Rollo
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/28/2012 7:58:00 PM
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Honestly Deb, I don't believe a reiki master snores! Who's the lucky chap? jimbo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/28/2012 4:56:00 PM
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This one is funny, Debs. it sounds romantic and then that awful snoring sound!!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/28/2012 3:48:00 PM
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You're back and with a good one , welcome back xx
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Date: 12/28/2012 3:44:00 PM
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lovely haiku xoxo pd
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