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Haiku 21

harsh winter is near sailing boats vanish in port - umbrellas unfurled.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/10/2024 10:04:00 AM

An outstanding Haiku My fav lind was “sailing bots, vanish in port”. Such great imagery, Victor…. Pangie

Jan Allison

Date: 6/20/2024 3:28:00 PM

such vivid imagery Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Wraith

Date: 6/15/2024 9:25:00 AM

I enjoyed this little piece of magic here Victor, well done sir. The Haiku is such an underrated and under appreciated piece of poetry. I really like the brevity of it all. Yours was masterful my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/11/2024 12:48:00 AM

- A great haiku, Victor :) - hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/10/2024 12:26:00 PM

A beautiful Haiku - it describes a perfect scene - well written my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/9/2024 4:48:00 PM

I love this Haiku. Well done. Pangie

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/9/2024 4:26:00 AM

A southern hemi--interesting, yesterday, was to be Hawaii's hottest ever recorded for that day of June 8th. 'Twas true, intermittedly, sea levels-tradewinds-islands, announced ere sunrise, but never again, Victor, Aloha

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 6/9/2024 5:08:00 AM

Today it is 30 C in Malta, a record.

Maria Williams

Date: 6/9/2024 3:24:00 AM

A lot of imagery in your Haiku dear . They are difficult to write. Not my favourite form, there's an art to it. I hope you're doing well?...Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 6/7/2024 7:39:00 PM

Great imagery on your Haiku. Hope you are doing well. Hugs my friend

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/7/2024 4:51:00 PM

Indeed, the cold us approaching -- wishing you cozy thoughts my friend

Silent One

Date: 6/7/2024 1:25:00 PM

You captured the moment so vividly..

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/6/2024 10:23:00 PM

This depiction of harsh winter paints a lovely contrast between sailboats and umbrellas. A fave for me. Nicely written, Victor.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/6/2024 3:54:00 PM

A haiku of beauty and information. I take it that winter means rain where you live. I like the picture you describe.

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/6/2024 3:19:00 PM

loved the gracious images yann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2024 1:19:00 PM

great KU. I like the image!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/6/2024 9:15:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku write. You told a story in just 3 short lines. Winter will be here before we know it. Enjoy your summer. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2024 8:12:00 AM

Great imagery in three lines! I feel a chill, the emptiness of the port, wildness of the umbrellas.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/6/2024 7:06:00 AM

Your haiku evokes vivid images, Victor; it's like looking at a kaleidoscope of seasons at once; I know the experience.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/6/2024 4:36:00 AM

Nice Haiku Victor, seasons all mixed up over there are they, I know the feeling, cheers David

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/6/2024 4:36:00 AM

Victor, the visuals conjured by your haiku are indeed rich in seasonal imagery! Nice one!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2024 3:28:00 AM

Good writing. I am wondering is the rainy season in fall and winter over there. Sara K

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/5/2024 11:23:00 PM

Lovely writing. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina