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Haiku 20

Love Haiku let it rain hard now for together we are safe ~ our love we now pledge

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Hilo Poet

Date: 4/19/2024 1:15:00 PM

What I prefer as a proverb; there is safety in numbers whether it brings two hearts together, or a million raindrops to create a sweet union, blessings, Victor. Aloha, William

Christina Bowring

Date: 3/31/2024 3:45:00 PM

Love this haiku dear Victor. Pledged love can weather all storms. A very touching, expressive read of which I so enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. Hope you’re having a nice Easter weekend. Blessings to you :)

Bill Baker

Date: 3/22/2024 4:55:00 PM

"Along with the sunshine, there got to be a little rain sometime", as the song says. In Love, together, we can face the challenges of rain or shine, Victor. Have a pleasant evening, Bill

Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2024 5:04:00 AM

Awwn this is such a heartfelt and beautiful haiku. I love it and felt the depth of this one so very much. Always a pleasure reading your work. Sending you light

Silent One

Date: 3/21/2024 1:50:00 PM

This is very sweet Victor..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/21/2024 9:56:00 AM

Such a promising Haiku, wish everyone felt that safe every day, thanks for sharing Victor, :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/21/2024 9:46:00 AM

Written straight from your heart, Victor! There is a sung, coziness in your lines and a feeling of being protected under the umbrella of love. So lovely. Blessings!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/21/2024 8:04:00 AM

Your touching haiku made me think of the song raindrops keep falling on my head:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/21/2024 7:32:00 AM

Very nicely done Victor, best wishes

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/21/2024 2:11:00 AM

o powerful haiku, best wishes poet

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/21/2024 12:13:00 AM

How romantic! Rainy days can be fun. A nice one!

Valsa George

Date: 3/20/2024 11:31:00 PM

Rains evoke emotions of love and romance in us. A beautiful haiku dear Victor!

Maria Williams

Date: 3/20/2024 4:47:00 PM

A heartfelt Haiku . A beautiful pledge of love and life dear Victor. ...Hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/20/2024 4:20:00 PM

A touching poem. He is a man who protects his loved one.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/20/2024 1:19:00 PM

Strength in loving company...absolutely! Well said.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2024 12:51:00 PM

Ahhh!!! Wonderfully romantic. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2024 12:09:00 PM

oh this is so interesting. I really like it, Victor.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2024 12:05:00 PM

- Lovely ... together we can manage anything :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/20/2024 11:36:00 AM

The center line says much…togetherness brings much hope.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/20/2024 11:18:00 AM

There may be a few storms ahead but there's always sunshine to come. Tom

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/20/2024 10:40:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this wonderful Haiku write. I love to hear the rain. It will bring Spring... Have a wonderful/fun day in the sun........................

Tom Woody

Date: 3/20/2024 9:57:00 AM

Very nice Victor. Recognizing up front there will be stormy times, yet committing to weather them together come what may

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/20/2024 8:01:00 AM

Beautifully reminiscing in love, Victor. No better pledge that the one between hearts. Plenty of emotion, yet succinctly done.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/20/2024 7:54:00 AM

Great poem . Hugs Eve