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Haiku 13 - Admiring Swans

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swans glided downstream regal, tall and elegant.... then they were headless

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 1/30/2022 2:21:00 AM

Good Morning Victor - What an adorable and enchanting entry with fun and play added. Have a beautiful and peaceful day now and always. Love and blessings always

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/26/2022 6:13:00 AM

Wow! Love the image you portray here, Victor, great pics to go with it:)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 1/25/2022 3:34:00 AM

This is so good, with a touch of humour, very nice indeed...Delice

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/24/2022 4:05:00 AM

Ha ha ha... Love it... Perfect haiku for that cute pic...

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/22/2022 8:27:00 PM

Feeding time i guess Victor, love the visual.

Michael Tor

Date: 1/22/2022 9:59:00 AM

Excellent Victor, got a chuckle. Thanks for posting. Stay well my friend...

Deb M

Date: 1/22/2022 6:55:00 AM

Love it Victor…headless hehe! Debx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/22/2022 6:48:00 AM

cute imagery, I have never seen a swan

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/22/2022 6:21:00 AM

A bit of humor! Enjoyed, dear friend! :):) ~ hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 1/22/2022 4:55:00 AM

From gracefulness to humour! Not very ladylike once they get hungry :) ~ Best regards, Victor. // paul

Valsa George

Date: 1/22/2022 2:03:00 AM

This is so lovely and clever ! The picture is quite illustrative

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/21/2022 11:46:00 PM

Victor, I loved this. Our swans here are black. Such a graceful bird. Beautiful imagery my friend. Blessings xxoo

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/21/2022 9:44:00 PM

Great images in your haiku, Victor! I enjoyed this one! Blessings, Kim M

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/21/2022 4:09:00 PM

lol I always enjoyed watching them dip for food, like that. Lovely photo and words Victor :)

Debra L Brown

Date: 1/21/2022 3:24:00 PM

The delicacy of these birds was captured well by you. The Hakui is beautiful, as is the image. Blessing Debra

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/21/2022 1:56:00 PM

Swans get hungry, too-and that's the 'bottom' line. I love this marvelously amusing haiku. Nice work, my friend. :)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/21/2022 12:20:00 PM

How delightful! Your Haiku describes this regal birds splendidly! Blessings, Paulette

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/21/2022 5:36:00 AM

Each line a splendid image my friend--regal, tall, elegant, headless. Your words bring the photo to fore.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/21/2022 5:29:00 AM

Victor, I genuinely appreciate the Haiku you've written, and it works nicely with the photographs you've included. It strikes a personal chord with me in particular. Dear friend, please accept my sincere regards.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2022 5:21:00 AM

They are grand and regal but when they sup, they turn their little bottoms up? I enjoyed reading this one. I always enjoy pictures of them when they face each other and form the heart. They mate for life and are emotionally upset when their mate dies. Your visit to my page is encouraging. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/21/2022 2:26:00 AM

- Beautiful to look at ... it must be cold to put your head under water ... :))) - Great written, my friend Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/21/2022 2:07:00 AM

Aw, such a cute Haiku, apt for the pictures Victor. It's been a long time since I've written a Haiku, will have to find time to write... Right now, busy with my return comments.. to friends... God bless... ~ Ani

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/21/2022 2:04:00 AM

Haha love it Victor Tom