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"To be in nature remote, alone

is to enter a portal into another realm unknown."

Quote by _Constance

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a hundred birds sing in green branches ... hidden a crow swoops low the birds are silent ... a deep waiting pause ______________________ August 8, 2021 Poetry/Non Traditional Haiku x2 Copyright Protected, ID 08-1279-617-08 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Brian Strand Your Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 08/08/2021 First Place Two Non traditional Haiku, sequenced

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/9/2021 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations Constance! This is such a true observation! We have had an invasion of crows. When they swoop down all the other birds are silent! Well down my friend. Congratulations! Blessings!

Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2021 11:58:00 AM

Sam, thanks for the congratulations and compliment, we have a huge raven attacking bird nests and backyard goldfish ponds in my neighborhood , he was standing on my porch railing and he was fierce looking Peace and tranquility

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/9/2021 8:49:00 AM

Grand imagery in these linked Haikus. A most enjoyable read that highlights bird tension superbly. Best wishes, Brian

Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2021 11:59:00 AM

Brian, thanks so much for the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/8/2021 7:06:00 PM

Beautifully-written, Constance. I loved it!

Constance La France
Date: 8/8/2021 7:11:00 PM

Milt, thank you for the visit and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance