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Haiku 12 - Bird

the cold north wind blows
birds dash into the darkness…
no light in winter.

zebra finch on tree
chirping midst perfumed blossoms:
children adore birds.

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Lisa Ricci

February 9, 2022 at 3:58 AM

Good Afternoon Victor - Hi. Who does not like the concept and being of a bird. No one. Children of all ages adore them. (smile) This is lovely. Have a wonderful day in every way. Love and Blessings always. Please remain safe.

Mike Bayles

January 22, 2022 at 7:03 PM

Victor, good going. I always enjoy verse about birds.

Jan Allison

January 20, 2022 at 7:17 AM

I especially love the robin poem Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Anitha Jayasankar

January 18, 2022 at 2:37 AM

Lovely Haiku on winter birds Victor...God bless...~ Ani

Anil Deo

January 17, 2022 at 6:14 PM

We can always enjoy God's creation, general Revelation. If birds were not winging the skies, humans would feel lonely among the stars (signed: Bird Adorer). Shalom shalom Victor

M. L. Kiser

January 17, 2022 at 5:08 PM

Those poor cold little birds; well done.

Tania Kitchin

January 17, 2022 at 10:56 AM

Sweet birds Victor!

Andrea Dietrich

January 16, 2022 at 5:55 PM

two winter birds for us to admire here, Victor. very nice.

Sally Eslinger

January 16, 2022 at 4:39 PM

Hi, Victor! So delighted to read these. Such accentuating contrast really worked for me to increase feeling their scenes. Hugsand

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 16, 2022 at 12:38 PM

- Lovely haiku, Victor ... I admire the birds too - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

January 16, 2022 at 12:10 PM

Charming - the zebra finch on tree. Lovely first verse. Been so busy this weekend but nice to have things to do. Snowing here today. :)

Alexis Y.

January 16, 2022 at 7:47 AM

Hi Victor, You penned such lovely haikus. Well done. Have a nice day my friend:-) Alexis

Charles Messina

January 16, 2022 at 3:40 AM

Lovely haiku, Victor. NJ State bird is the finch. Funny, I've only seen a handful in my entire life here.

Joanna Daniel

January 16, 2022 at 12:58 AM

Lovely haikus, Victor, we all love hearing birds sing:)

Brenda Chiri

January 15, 2022 at 10:19 PM

I see you and Paul have been writing haiku’s lately! Great job my dear friend! Amazing!:)

Debra L Brown

January 15, 2022 at 5:05 PM

Victory Your Hakius was enjoyable. They created a charming bird narrative. Blessings ~ Debra

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 15, 2022 at 4:22 PM

A genuinely beguiling haiku set, Victor. The pictures are lovely companions. :)

Bill Baker

January 15, 2022 at 4:01 PM

So do adults like me. Our little friends are hiding under our shrubs right now, wind-chill 15 here in Texas. Thanks for a well written Haiku, Victor. Bill

Silpika Kalita

January 15, 2022 at 2:53 PM

Such an exquisite haiku. Avian haiku is something which always has its own enigma and you really penned a miracle.

Eve Roper

January 15, 2022 at 2:24 PM

Both haikus well done, Victor, very visual with feel

Judy Ball

January 15, 2022 at 1:01 PM

I too love to watch the birds. I feed them. A lovely write and love the pics. God Bless, JB

Susan Lawrence

January 15, 2022 at 11:30 AM

Love these words and the images..especially chirping midst perfumed blossoms. Happy Healthy New Year to you and yours! Susan :)

L Milton Hankins

January 15, 2022 at 8:52 AM

Nice, Victor! I'm hardly a child, but I do adore the birds that visit my lawn each day in the summertime.

Valsa George

January 15, 2022 at 8:05 AM

Both are beautiful Haikus.... Victor. Not only children but elders too love birds ! I haven't seen many haiku from you. I have recently developed a special liking for them .