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Haiku 102

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Ocean high as sky
Tall ship sinking in the deep
dory in its wake

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 8:13:00 AM

Very clever and love it so much...so nicely written.

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/26/2016 11:43:00 AM

Beautiful haiku excellently drawn with matching picture my lovely friend. 7 i feel. Loved always, bl

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 3/25/2016 10:26:00 PM

Wonderful images. Neat little gem.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/21/2016 12:48:00 PM

A superb HAIKU with a marvelous illustration! Excellent word use... Best wishes, Keith

Elaine George
Date: 2/22/2016 3:04:00 AM

Thank you Keith. Elaine

Steve Grammatico

Date: 2/19/2016 5:58:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Elaine. Congrats.

Elaine George
Date: 2/20/2016 5:54:00 AM

Thank you, Steve.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2016 7:39:00 PM

hey, congrats for the win, sweet lady!

Elaine George
Date: 2/19/2016 2:10:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Elaine

Eve Roper

Date: 2/17/2016 1:30:00 PM

Elaine, congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve

Elaine George
Date: 2/17/2016 2:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve. Elaine

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/17/2016 7:32:00 AM

Elaine, congratulations on your excellent win, for your outstanding Haiku! Hugs, Sandra

Elaine George
Date: 2/17/2016 1:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sandra. Elaine

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/17/2016 1:42:00 AM

Congratulations!

Elaine George
Date: 2/17/2016 1:46:00 AM

Thank you, Susan. Elaine

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/16/2016 10:49:00 PM

Congrats on ur great win with this awesome haiku Elaine.

Elaine George
Date: 2/17/2016 6:47:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. Upma, for your welcome comments. Elaine

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/16/2016 6:48:00 PM

Had to look up dory ... I was thinking of Finding Nemo. Lol! Congrats on the win, Elaine.

Elaine George
Date: 2/16/2016 7:10:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy, I was born in New Brunswick, Canada and lived in a Fishing Village in the early years of my life. Spent time with my brother and cousin Dougie playing in the dories pulled up on Jack's Beach - most of them owned by family members. Elaine